作业帮我写了几句话跟班长说祝福 请高手看下有没有语法错误 请看补充 哪句错了或者用不好麻烦回答指出 谢谢
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我写了几句话跟班长说祝福 请高手看下有没有语法错误 请看补充 哪句错了或者用不好麻烦回答指出 谢谢
Dear monitor,I am your old friend who is James.I hear your birthday will come and they blesses you.The reason why I think it is unfair to me that is i am a monitor too.Oh,This is just a joke. First,I want to say to you Happy birthday.then, I wish you have a healthy body and keep a slender figure.Finally,you can give me a call when you have free time.
Dear monitor,I am your old friend who is James.I hear your birthday will come and they blesses you.The reason why I think it is unfair to me that is i am a monitor too.Oh,This is just a joke. First,I want to say to you Happy birthday.then, I wish you have a healthy body and keep a slender figure.Finally,you can give me a call when you have free time.
原文可以用,但可作如下修改会更好一点：
Dear Monitor,I am your old friend,James.I am told that your birthday is approaching and every one gives his best wish to you.
The reason why I think it is unfair to me it that am a monitor,too.Oh,This is just a joke.
First,I want to say Happy birthday!and I wish you good health and a slender figure.Finally,please give me a call when you are free.
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再问： 原文有没有语法错误呢
再答： -I hear your birthday....(我听说，i am told) -They blesses (第三人称复数，不需要加s) -too前面要加逗号 -wish在作祝福时，后面一般直接跟名词 -有空，一般说成be free(have free time是照中文翻的，不是英文表达） （好就请采纳。）
Dear Monitor,I am your old friend,James.I am told that your birthday is approaching and every one gives his best wish to you.
The reason why I think it is unfair to me it that am a monitor,too.Oh,This is just a joke.
First,I want to say Happy birthday!and I wish you good health and a slender figure.Finally,please give me a call when you are free.
（好就请采纳.）
再问： 原文有没有语法错误呢
再答： -I hear your birthday....(我听说，i am told) -They blesses (第三人称复数，不需要加s) -too前面要加逗号 -wish在作祝福时，后面一般直接跟名词 -有空，一般说成be free(have free time是照中文翻的，不是英文表达） （好就请采纳。）
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