作业帮英文：改语法!和改句子结构
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英文：改语法!和改句子结构
求高人帮我改改语法吧.我这文章写得幼稚,顺便帮我改改有些句子的结构.最好写的和美国人一样,加点修饰词之类的~
All three of these pieces are a portrait and there are deep meaning behind them.Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in the 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the characters in Avatar because of the blue skin.I think Avatar shows the changing from 20th century till now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than real people.According to the research he said he thinks people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s.That is the reason he likes to focus on famous people’s faces and catch the emotion.My first thought on The Blonde is she looks happy.And then I focus on her face for 5 seconds,I think she looks a little bit upset.At the beginning I think she looks happy because the color is bright.Thus,the color of the picture can change the emotion.The Self-portrait is also from 20th century.Compared to Warhol’s Blond,the Self-portrait looks sad.From her picture we can see she really wants to stop wars because of her experience.She just can use his drawing to show her thinking and sadness.She doesn’t want to speak to others that she hates war,but she just hope his drawing can tell and resonate.The picture of Gudea statue is really different from other two pictures.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash.This statue includes ruler ship and religion.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha.The same idea is they have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the dark color looks serious.Thus,people would respect it.
求高人帮我改改语法吧.我这文章写得幼稚,顺便帮我改改有些句子的结构.最好写的和美国人一样,加点修饰词之类的~
All three of these pieces are a portrait and there are deep meaning behind them.Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in the 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the characters in Avatar because of the blue skin.I think Avatar shows the changing from 20th century till now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than real people.According to the research he said he thinks people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s.That is the reason he likes to focus on famous people’s faces and catch the emotion.My first thought on The Blonde is she looks happy.And then I focus on her face for 5 seconds,I think she looks a little bit upset.At the beginning I think she looks happy because the color is bright.Thus,the color of the picture can change the emotion.The Self-portrait is also from 20th century.Compared to Warhol’s Blond,the Self-portrait looks sad.From her picture we can see she really wants to stop wars because of her experience.She just can use his drawing to show her thinking and sadness.She doesn’t want to speak to others that she hates war,but she just hope his drawing can tell and resonate.The picture of Gudea statue is really different from other two pictures.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash.This statue includes ruler ship and religion.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha.The same idea is they have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the dark color looks serious.Thus,people would respect it.
你的文章大体意思表达的挺明确的,但是有的地方废话多,有的地方表达不简练 不清晰,记住读起来朗朗上口的文章就是好文章,你的对艺术作品的评价总的来说不错了,我就给改了几个小地方,希望你以后继续努力,再艺术鉴赏方面有所成就
All three of these pieces form a main portrait with a deep meaning behind .Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the blue- skined characters in Avatar which shows the changes from 20th century to now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than the real.According to the research,he said,people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s,which catalyses him focus on faces of famous people and catch their emotions.the first impression of mine on The Blonde is the happiness and then ,in around 5 seconds,upset.The first happy impression of mine ,I think,is due to the bright color.Thus ,in conclusion,the color of pictures can change the emotion.
Compared to Warhol’s Blond ,The Self-portrait is also from 20th century but focus on the sadness.In her picture we can see she really wants to stop the war.but what she can do is just drawing out the sadness.She doesn’t want to tell others that she hates the war,but she just hope her drawings can tell and resonate.The picture ,Gudea statue,is really different from the other two.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash with ruler ship and religion inside.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha for they all have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the darkness confuses seriousness ,sadness and the respects of people inside.
All three of these pieces form a main portrait with a deep meaning behind .Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the blue- skined characters in Avatar which shows the changes from 20th century to now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than the real.According to the research,he said,people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s,which catalyses him focus on faces of famous people and catch their emotions.the first impression of mine on The Blonde is the happiness and then ,in around 5 seconds,upset.The first happy impression of mine ,I think,is due to the bright color.Thus ,in conclusion,the color of pictures can change the emotion.
Compared to Warhol’s Blond ,The Self-portrait is also from 20th century but focus on the sadness.In her picture we can see she really wants to stop the war.but what she can do is just drawing out the sadness.She doesn’t want to tell others that she hates the war,but she just hope her drawings can tell and resonate.The picture ,Gudea statue,is really different from the other two.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash with ruler ship and religion inside.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha for they all have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the darkness confuses seriousness ,sadness and the respects of people inside.