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As a woman in England during World War ,I was pushing my baby brother in the park on the morning when I met a American soldier .His eyes were on the baby carriage,no on me .he asked politely if he can push the baby across the park since there were many people around,I fell it was safe to allow him .The soldier watched the child close with a smile in his face as he went on silently.At an otherside of the park,he stopped "I just got a good news that I'm a father,"he said ."And I want to see how it felt.Thank you very much."
As a woman in England during World War ,I was pushing my baby brother in the park on the morning when I met a American soldier .His eyes were on the baby carriage,no on me .he asked politely if he can push the baby across the park since there were many people around,I fell it was safe to allow him .The soldier watched the child close with a smile in his face as he went on silently.At an otherside of the park,he stopped "I just got a good news that I'm a father,"he said ."And I want to see how it felt.Thank you very much."
on the morning----in the morning
a American soldier---an American soldier
no on me----not on me
can----could
fell----felt
close ----closely
in his face---- on his face
an----the
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a American soldier---an American soldier
no on me----not on me
can----could
fell----felt
close ----closely
in his face---- on his face
an----the
a去掉