英语作文修改，急。我明天要交这个作业，可是我英语不好，所以就先写中文的之后去网上翻成英语。我今天给老师让老师帮我改下，可

英语作文修改，急。
我明天要交这个作业，可是我英语不好，所以就先写中文的之后去网上翻成英语。我今天给老师让老师帮我改下，可是最后放学的时候老师没帮我改，只跟我说这个很像是从网上翻译下来的，不好。所以我想请你们帮我改正错误，让这篇作文里的一些单词变得简单一点，而且更加的连接以及不像是网上翻译出来的。谢谢！我在线等。麻烦你们了。
Do you know what is the best drink in the world ?
In 21st century, accompany quite a lot various types of drinks, we ignore the most important drink. WATER
In the present-day, by reason of the people are busy ,the attract of drinks . Therefore the water should be a substitute for other dringks . In life, less and less of people are attention to drinking water . So , we have investigated 28 students of 4th of ESO c.
There are more people prefer drink water than others. However there are a few people only like other drinks too. Everybody think the water is the most important . Have these reasons : first of one thing, 28.16% of people consider the water is indispensable, secondly 21,40% of people think it can make we to be health, and 10.7% of people deem water appeases thirst , the rest people think if you don’t drink water , the body will disappearance moisture density and you will die . A thing which make we so incredible is ,that even they know the water is important , but they didn’t drink water at correrct moment .

Almost half of them only drink water when they’re thirsty, but such behaviour is incorrect. There are a two-thirds of water in our bodies, until you feel thirsty, you just lost 2 per cent of moisture content. We asked to students in 4 of ESO if they have a habit of dringking water when they get up, but more than half of them replied that have not this habit. And this are other false custom. You drink water at morning precisely because you lost water during a time of sleeping. So, in the morning you also take in some fluids like water. This should never be a substitute for other drinks.For instance, if you like drink coke in the morning, it cause you have a calcium defeciency or you like drink coffee or juice , it don’t take you enough water, for this reason, we hope you drink water when you get up. The normal demand of water are 2L all day. In this class are few people are not normal. The important thing we want to tell you is taht drinking water can not make you reduce your weight, it only make you feeling of satiety of fullness. On this basis, we can say that a three-quarter majority don’t drink water at right moment.

Do you know what is the best drink in the world ?
In 21st century, there are many types of drinks.For that reason, we often ignore the most important drink - Water.
Now, in our world people are busier than before. They don't have extra engery to pay attantion on drinks.People just drink some water; however,in the real world less and less people are on attention drink pure water regularly. So , (we have investigated 28 students of 4th of ESO c.)(这什么玩意？！)
Even though some people prefer to drink other beverages,water is still a common acceptable drink for people. Everyone agrees that water is very important for the daily lives.First, 28.16% of people consider that water is indispensable, secondly 21,40% of people think it can make healthfully for their bodies, and 10.7% of people think water can stop thirsty. All of people think if they don’t drink water,they will die. A thing which make us so incredible is that even though many people know the importance of water ,they don’t drink water when they need.
Almost half of poeple drink water when they feel thirsty.In fact,this behaviour is not good for people. There is a two-thirds of water in our bodies. If you feel thirsty, you just lost 2 percent of water in your body. For example, we asked 4 students in ESO if they had a habit of dringking water when they got up, but more than half of them replied that they did not have this habit.( And this are other false custom. 什么意思？)You drink water in the morning precisely because you lose water during a time of sleeping. So, you also have to take in some fluids like water when you wake up.Other drinks cannnot do that. For instance, if you like drinking coke in the morning, it cause you high blood suger;if you like drinking coffee or juice, it doesn’t provide you enough water for digeting food. For this reason, we hope you drink water when you get up. The normal demand of water is 2 L everyday. (In this class are few people are not normal. 什么意思？不懂) The important thing we want to tell you is drinking more water can not lose weight. It only make you feel fullness. ALL in all, we can say that a three-quarter majority don’t drink water at right moment. (最后一句没看懂)
我只是从语法上改了，语言上还是有些问题（比如你主题是最好的饮料，为什么最好我没怎么看出来，例子用的不好，说服力不够。。。）