请帮我修改这段自我介绍：Hello everyone.My name is XXX.I'm 17 years old a

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请帮我修改这段自我介绍：Hello everyone.My name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I come fromXXX.I'm at grade 11 now.Well,I don't like sports very much,so I always atsy at home reading,listening to music or go for a movie in my spare time.I like watching Ameirican Tv series so much,my favorite is 《Rasing Hope》.Generally speaking,I'm a out-going and amicable girl.

Well不要 Well,不太适合开头 atsy改成stay.go for a movie那句改成 or I will go to the cinema to watch a movie in my spare time.I like watching American TV series so much改成 I like to watch American TV series so much,最好加个原因喔~下一句：my favorite is 那里改成；my favorite tv series are Raising Hope.最後那句不要了~什麼意思也看不懂
备注：最後一句是指从Generally那里开始喔~ 再答： Hello， my name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I am fromXXX. I'm a grade11 student. now.Well，I don't like sports very much，so I always atsy at home reading，listening to music or go for a movie in my spare time.I like watching Ameirican Tv series so much，my favorite is 《Rasing Hope》.Generally speaking，I'm a out-going and amicable girl.
再答：传错
再答： Hello， my name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I am fromXXX. I'm a grade11 student. I don't like sports very much，so I always atsy at home reading，listening to music or go for a movie in my spare time.I like watching Ameirican Tv series so much，my favorite is 《Rasing Hope》.Generally speaking，I'm a out-going and amicable girl.
再答：又按到
再答：好烦啊
再答： Hello， my name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I am fromXXX. I'm a grade11 student. I don't like sports very much，so I always stay at home reading books，listen to musics or go to the cinema to watch a movie in my spare time.I like to watch American Tv series so much because...(自己加），my favorite book is 《Rasing Hope》.
再答：这个就对了
再答：采纳~~
再答：花了不少时间啊

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