请帮我修改下英语Hello, everyone my name is huiyi I’am twenty-tow yea

请帮我修改下英语
Hello, everyone my name is huiyi I’am twenty-tow years old. I come from Xian shanxi province in china. I’v lived in shan xi since I was born
And I’am living in xian now. I’am currently a driver at the shanxi construction company. There are four people in my family my panrents grandma and me.
I have a one elder brother and tow elder sister.
And my panrents living in xian too., My father is a mechine engineer. he works in the shanxi construction too. But he often go to abroad/he used to go abroad. And my mother is a housewife.she is a great woman. I live with my mother since I was bron.
I am very grateful to her for my upbringing.
I interested in sports, listening to music speaking english and spinding time with my friend .
I am a faithful man. And I am easy going. I haven’t girlfriend. Ok
I am happy to come here to stady with you. Besause I am english very poor . would you give me some good advice. Iam really glad could be with you today, I hople ereyone has a wonderful time
Thank you

Hello,everyone my name is huiyi I’m twenty-two years old.I come from Xian shanxi province in china.I’ve been living in shan xi since I was born
I’m living in xian now.I’m currently a driver at the shanxi construction company.There are four people in my family:my parents,my grandma and me.
I have one elder brother and two elder sisters.
My parents are living in xian too.,My father is a mechanical engineer.he works in the shanxi construction too.But he often go abroad/he used to go abroad.And my mother is a housewife.she is a great woman.I live with my mother since I was born.
I am very grateful to her for bringing me up.
I interested in sports,listening to music,speaking english and spending time with my friends .
I am a faithful man.And I am easy going.I don't have a girlfriend.OkI am happy to come here to study with you.Because my English is very poor .would you give me some good advice.I am really glad to be with you today,I hope everyone has a wonderful time
Thank you
问题不大,程度已经不错了.
有些语法和句子结构上的问题,尽量改了.例如：My English is very poor (不是I am English very poor)
注意:单数和复数的法,句子开头尽量不要写那么多“And”,缩写方式错误：“I am”缩写后是“I'm”,不是“I'am”
单词拼写有很多错误,例如：two(不是tow),mechanical engineer(不是mechine engineer),spending(不是spinding),hope,everyone,parents,because等等