作业帮英语中,我的改法正确吗?
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英语中,我的改法正确吗?
he was generally recognized as the major American weriter of his time when he died on July 6 (在他7月6日逝世后,他被公认为那个世代最主要的美国作家）
以下是书上的原话.
个人想不通那个世代为什么用his time,为什么用when.
这样改行吗：he was generally recognized as the major American weriter in that time after he died on July 6
he was generally recognized as the major American weriter of his time when he died on July 6 (在他7月6日逝世后,他被公认为那个世代最主要的美国作家）
以下是书上的原话.
个人想不通那个世代为什么用his time,为什么用when.
这样改行吗：he was generally recognized as the major American weriter in that time after he died on July 6
of his time 是很英语的说法,而in that time 太chiglish了.aftr也没有when好,后者更有语感．when就是强调他死了,再他死后被公认为那个世代最主要的美国作家,不需要用after．
更正：作家－write
更正：作家－write