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请英语大神批改这个句子!

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请英语大神批改这个句子!
she has a gift for music creation that her songs words are moving me deeply ,when i heard her songs,my heart beat alone with its melody.
she has a gift for music creation that the words of her songs moved me deeply.When i heard her songs,my heart beat alone with its melodies.