作业帮鄙人的英语作文。。。求大神批改修正完善
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鄙人的英语作文。。。求大神批改修正完善
题目 Using Media in Class
On May 20th,2014,a modern class full of new technology was held in Hefei No.1 Middle School.It was the first class in Hefei to use Ipads,combining the media with the models of traditional educations.
It is this try that promotes the argument between the supporters and opponents.
The optimistic argue that new equipments can help students build great imagination.Not only can the attempts make the book easy to understand,but also,they believe,improve students' grades.
On the contrary,some people of pessimism emphasize the disadvantages of the media class. With equipments showing pictrues and voices,students may try little to think on their own.Moreover,depending on the media too much probably causes the difficulty in reading many well-known novels.
However,it is a opportunity to transform the models of education. Though there are lots of problems to solve,in my considered opinion,we should have confidence in this audacious try. It is sure that the media can catch students' eyes and impress them a lot.
After all,to fit active minds of today's teenagers,the media class is merely one try.
就这么多。。。求大神修改
题目 Using Media in Class
On May 20th,2014,a modern class full of new technology was held in Hefei No.1 Middle School.It was the first class in Hefei to use Ipads,combining the media with the models of traditional educations.
It is this try that promotes the argument between the supporters and opponents.
The optimistic argue that new equipments can help students build great imagination.Not only can the attempts make the book easy to understand,but also,they believe,improve students' grades.
On the contrary,some people of pessimism emphasize the disadvantages of the media class. With equipments showing pictrues and voices,students may try little to think on their own.Moreover,depending on the media too much probably causes the difficulty in reading many well-known novels.
However,it is a opportunity to transform the models of education. Though there are lots of problems to solve,in my considered opinion,we should have confidence in this audacious try. It is sure that the media can catch students' eyes and impress them a lot.
After all,to fit active minds of today's teenagers,the media class is merely one try.
就这么多。。。求大神修改
However那一段 opportunity前面的a改为an 再答： 还有就是觉得句子虽然都很好 可是好句子聚在一起 显得太累赘 要注意长短句 难句和简单句的交替 嘛~总的来说 你水平挺不错的 对高一来说
再问： 啊粗心
再问： 你的回答完美的解决了我的问题，谢谢！
再问： 啊粗心
再问： 你的回答完美的解决了我的问题，谢谢！