作业帮英语不太好 帮忙给改一下
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英语不太好 帮忙给改一下
Dear Orologeria Meccanica
I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality and free repairing my watch.
I am a Chinese friend who visited your shop a few days ago. I am in China now. I sell you picture frame made in my company in order to express gratitude.
I am looking forward to your visit to China when I will be able to recommend Chinese culture and Chinese food.Thank you very much.
Yours Sincerely
Dear Orologeria Meccanica
I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality and free repairing my watch.
I am a Chinese friend who visited your shop a few days ago. I am in China now. I sell you picture frame made in my company in order to express gratitude.
I am looking forward to your visit to China when I will be able to recommend Chinese culture and Chinese food.Thank you very much.
Yours Sincerely
Dear Orologeria Meccanica：
Thank you for your hospitality and free-repairing my watch.
I am a Chinese who has visited your shop before.I am in China now.In order to express my thankfulness,I sell you a picture frame which was made in my company.（为了感谢人家,你为什么还要卖人家东西呢?或者是给?如果是“给”,就是单词give）
I hope that you can visit China sometime,then I will glad to recommend the Chinese culture and food to you.Have a good day!
Sincerely
你的名字
我按照你原文的意思,尽量使词汇意思不变,更符合西方的通信规则.我删除了一些重复的词语,比如warm hospitality,我删除了warm,改了些词语,比如gratitude我改成了thankfulness,加了和删了点东西,比如最后一句话,你说要带他到中国玩,还要谢谢他,我删除了谢谢他,加了have a good day,这是西方再见时最常用的语言.希望能够帮到你.
Thank you for your hospitality and free-repairing my watch.
I am a Chinese who has visited your shop before.I am in China now.In order to express my thankfulness,I sell you a picture frame which was made in my company.（为了感谢人家,你为什么还要卖人家东西呢?或者是给?如果是“给”,就是单词give）
I hope that you can visit China sometime,then I will glad to recommend the Chinese culture and food to you.Have a good day!
Sincerely
你的名字
我按照你原文的意思,尽量使词汇意思不变,更符合西方的通信规则.我删除了一些重复的词语,比如warm hospitality,我删除了warm,改了些词语,比如gratitude我改成了thankfulness,加了和删了点东西,比如最后一句话,你说要带他到中国玩,还要谢谢他,我删除了谢谢他,加了have a good day,这是西方再见时最常用的语言.希望能够帮到你.