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请英语高手帮忙改一下语法错误的地方,感激不尽!

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请英语高手帮忙改一下语法错误的地方,感激不尽!

As is vividly depicted in the cartoon,there are three young and a woman  playing a football match.In the centre of the football field,there is an older man.The poor man is the four players’ father and he is regard as a football.But the four children are defending their goal.Because they are all do not want to take care of their father.
It is obvious that attend older people has become a talk of this society.As a child,when we grow up it is  our duty to look after our parents.However,some irresponsible children are not will to take care of their  father and mother.In a study that appear in Journal of Sociology,Peking University researchers survived more than 2500 people aged between 25 and 40 in Beijing.They find that 63% of those survived said that they rather send their parents to nursing homes than attend their parents by themselves.What's a pity!We should undertake the responsibility to treat our parents with great care and tenderness.
In this permissive and money-driven society,we should not discard our traditional virtues.Imagine that when we are old,there is no people to take care of us.What’s the kind of your mood?
As it's vividly depicted in the comic,there are three young men and one woman playing a football match together.In the center of the soccer field,there is an older man.The poor man is the four players’ father and he is regard as a soccer ball.All four children are defending their goals because they do not want to take care their father.
It is obvious that attending older people has become the talk of this society.As a child,after we grow up it is our duty to look after our parents.However,some children are irresponsible and not willing to take care of their father and mother.In a study that appeared in Journal of Sociology,Peking University researchers survived more than 2500 people aged between 25 and 40 in Beijing.They find that 63% of those survived said that they rather send their parents to nursing homes than attend their parents by themselves.What's a pity!We should undertake the responsibility to treat our parents with great care and tenderness.
In this permissive and money-driven society,we should not discard our traditional virtues.Imagine that when we are old,and there is no people to take care of us.What would you feel?