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I like of girl, want to be a little shorter than me, pay attention to is "a little", but also love clean, will dress up oneself, do not look not dress up, decent and generous, simple and elegant, from inside to outside has a special temperament, best can play a musical instrument, because I can, so have the common language, short hair, voice to listen, to learn what the same with me, at least so you can learn from each other, make progress together, and will not give each other too much pressure. And love to laugh, have a bright and cheerful disposition. Like sports is the best. The most important still is to put the words together.
解题思路: 注意中英文表达得异同。中文喜欢具体,喜欢省略主语,但英文较笼统,主语一般要有。句式要正确(简单句,并列句,复合句,特殊句要掌握)
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The girl I like is expected to be a little shorter than me, only "a little".She should love to keep clean and know how to dress well. (do not look not dress up这句话是什么意思,是表达不单看起来漂亮吗?如是,就改为:She should not only look beautiful), but also look decent, generous, simple and elegant.From inside to outside she should have a special temperament.It's better if she can play a musical instrument, because I can.Therefore,we will have something in common such as short hair, voice to listen. She should learn something that I know so that we can learn from each other and make progress together,which will bring too much pressure to each other as well. My girl should love to laugh with a bright and cheerful personality. And if she likes sports,that will be awesome. (The most important still is to put the words together.这句话想表达什么?请添加中文留言,以便我解答)
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