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My birthday is on July 11, I will be very happy on that day,because my father bought me a gift, sister can buy cake for me, my mother cooked some food for me. This will be a nice day.
My birthday is on July 11, I will be very happy on that day,because my father bought me a gift, sister can buy cake for me, my mother cooked some food for me. This will be a nice day.
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My birthday is coming on Jul.11. I will be very happy on that day, because my father will buy me a gift, my sister can buy a cake for me, and my mother will cook some food for me. This will be a nice day!
My birthday is coming on Jul.11. I will be very happy on that day, because my father will buy me a gift, my sister can buy a cake for me, and my mother will cook some food for me. This will be a nice day!