作业帮请问我写的两篇英语作文有什么问题吗?
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请问我写的两篇英语作文有什么问题吗?
Last weekend,we did a survey about smoking students.Here are the results of the survey:89% of the students never smoke,8% of the students sometimes smoke,and 3%of the students always smoke.I think,cigarette is bad for our health.As secondary students,weshouldn't smoke.I suggest,we should do more sports,study harder,rather than smoke!
Save Water
Water is important in our life.there's 60%~70% of water in our body.We need 2500ml of water every day.If you don't drink any water for 5 days,you'll be dead.
But nowadays,water is less than before,and we often waste water in our life.I think,we should use less water to wash your hands,your face and clothes.We should use the water more than twice.If we do like these,we'll save a lot of water.
Last weekend,we did a survey about smoking students.Here are the results of the survey:89% of the students never smoke,8% of the students sometimes smoke,and 3%of the students always smoke.I think,cigarette is bad for our health.As secondary students,weshouldn't smoke.I suggest,we should do more sports,study harder,rather than smoke!
Save Water
Water is important in our life.there's 60%~70% of water in our body.We need 2500ml of water every day.If you don't drink any water for 5 days,you'll be dead.
But nowadays,water is less than before,and we often waste water in our life.I think,we should use less water to wash your hands,your face and clothes.We should use the water more than twice.If we do like these,we'll save a lot of water.
第一篇,第一句smoking students 改成 students that smoking（抽烟的学生）比较好.英语中没有“smoking students ”这样的说法.后面都挺好的,没有什么错误.
第二篇,第二句“there's 60%~70% of water in our body.”意思不通,最好改成“Water constitutes about 60%~70% of the weight of our body"水占我们身体重量的百分之60到70.
往后,If you don't drink any water for 5 days,you'll be dead.把for 5 days 改成within 5 days（在5天内一点谁都不喝的话,就会死）
接着,I think,we should use less water to wash your hands,your face and clothes.（我认为你应该…）句子不是特别通顺,建议改成" I think we should use less water to wash hands,face and clothes.
We should use the water more than twice(我们应该用水两次以上?）句意不太明确,建议改成"we should learn to reuse the water in daily life.我们要学会在日常生活中再利用水资源.
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第二篇,第二句“there's 60%~70% of water in our body.”意思不通,最好改成“Water constitutes about 60%~70% of the weight of our body"水占我们身体重量的百分之60到70.
往后,If you don't drink any water for 5 days,you'll be dead.把for 5 days 改成within 5 days（在5天内一点谁都不喝的话,就会死）
接着,I think,we should use less water to wash your hands,your face and clothes.（我认为你应该…）句子不是特别通顺,建议改成" I think we should use less water to wash hands,face and clothes.
We should use the water more than twice(我们应该用水两次以上?）句意不太明确,建议改成"we should learn to reuse the water in daily life.我们要学会在日常生活中再利用水资源.
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