帮忙修改英语作文内容不需要改,只要找出语法错误和读不通顺的地方,并改正 A Real Superman Chr

帮忙修改英语作文
内容不需要改,只要找出语法错误和读不通顺的地方,并改正 A Real Superman Christopher Reeve Christopher Reeve played the role of superman,he is my favourite actor,too.He was born in september 1952,when he was still in college,he has acted in TV shows and films.He made many successful films and TV shows.But unfortunately,in 1995,he fell from his horse,and broke his back.The doctors did not expect him to live.But he pulled through because of his perseverance,he started a new life with great courage.One year after the accident,he returned to film making.He also raised a lot of money to promote medical research.He made speeches all over the USA about his experiences,to encourage a lot of people living with all kinds of problems.Many people choose to give up when they face the difficulty.They blame everyone and everything but not themselves,they even commit suicide.I think the things they do are extremely wrong.As the saying goes:God close one door while opening another one for you.Some disabled people like Christopher Reeve,Stephen Hawing,Helen Keller,Ludwig Van Beethoven even didi much better than us in some ways.The life of a man is a very small part in history.The destiny of everyone is differ in thousands of ways.Christopher faced such a huge setback bravely.Can we give up so easy when we face the challenge?The world is fine.The life is fine,too.As long as you try,whatever you get,you are the hero.

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Reeve Christopher Reeve played the role of [the] superman,[and] he is my [favorite] actor,too.
He was born in September 1952.
When he was still in the college,he [had] acted ) [several roles] in TV shows and films.
(act用的有点奇怪,最好加宾语.)
He made many successful films and TV shows.(重复,让人看了很繁琐.把films and TV shows改成 works 表作品.)
But unfortunately,in 1995,he fell from his horse and broke his back.
The doctors did not expect him to live.(live改成survive比较好,幸存下来.)
But he pulled through because of his perseverance,[and] he started a new life with great courage.
One year after the accident,he returned to film making.
He also raised a lot of money to promote medical research.
He made speeches all over the USA about his experiences to encourage a lot of people living with all kinds of problems.
Many people choose to give up when they face the difficulty.
They blame everyone and everything but not themselves,[and] they even commit suicide.
I think the things they [did] are extremely wrong.
As the saying goes:God [closes] one door while opening another one for you.
Some disabled people like Christopher Reeve,Stephen Hawing,Helen Keller,Ludwig Van Beethoven even did much better than us in some ways.
The life of a man is a very small part in history.
The destiny of everyone is differ in thousands of ways.
Christopher faced such a huge setback bravely.
Can we give up so easy when we face the challenge?
The world is fine.
The life is fine,too.
As long as you try,whatever you get,you are the hero.
行文中最大的几点缺陷：句子与句子间缺少连词,例如and.
滥用代词,句型单调.前半篇多为He怎么怎么样.
用词过于中文翻译式.