英语造句下面几个句子是否正确,错误的地方请指出,谢谢!1.昨晚上看看到将近12点了,要不是最后不小心把笔记本踢翻了估计还

英语造句
下面几个句子是否正确,错误的地方请指出,谢谢!
1.昨晚上看看到将近12点了,要不是最后不小心把笔记本踢翻了估计还要继续看下去.
I watched Nikita nearly 12 point in the evening if my computer is not kick over perhapers watching still .

2.这周好长啊,整整要上七天的班,真好累啊,全身都是酸疼.

so long this week has seven working days I very tired and body aches whole.
3.每天坚持造五个句子,英语能不能进步呢?
I Insist on make sentences everyday could raise the english level.
4.这周六外婆生日,可是周未又答应朋友替他办事,真烦!
Bother it that my grandmathor is birthday on this saturday but I promise my frend do something .
5.今天周四,老妈提前回老家了,晚上没有做饭,回家自己吃泡面真好啊!
it's Thursday today my mother come back home old the dinner not make I can boiled noodles .
大家帮我看看这几个句子毛病在哪里,要怎么改好,请大家不吝赐教!

1.昨晚上看看到将近12点了,要不是最后不小心把笔记本踢翻了估计还要继续看下去.
I watched Nikita nearly 12 point in the evening if my computer is not kick over perhapers watching still
I had watched Nikita till nearly 12 o'clock at midnight,if my computer was not kicked over,perhaps I would have keeped on watching it.
2.这周好长啊,整整要上七天的班,真好累啊,全身都是酸疼.
so long this week has seven working days I very tired and body aches whole.
It seems that this week is so long to me!（感觉长,并不是真的长） I have to go to work everyday in this week.I feel so tired and ache all over.
3.每天坚持造五个句子,英语能不能进步呢?
I Insist on make sentences everyday could raise the english level.Insist on doing
If I insist on making five sentences everyday,could my English be improved?
4.这周六外婆生日,可是周未又答应朋友替他办事,真烦!
Bother it that my grandmathor is birthday on this saturday but I promise my frend do something .do sb a favor 帮某人办事
I was bothered by the mather that my grandmathor's birthday is this Saturday,but I had promised to do my friend a favor on the same day.
5.今天周四,老妈提前回老家了,晚上没有做饭,回家自己吃泡面真好啊!
it's Thursday today my mother come back home old the dinner not make I can boiled noodles .
泡面instant noodles
It's Thursday today.my mother had gone to her hometown.There is no one cooked the dinner,so I can boil instant noodles.It's great!