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短文改错求教,真心不会. I'm good at singing.I've be

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短文改错求教,真心不会. I'm good at singing.I've be
短文改错求教,真心不会.
I'm good at singing.I've been interested in music and dreamed of become a singer ever since me childhood.My parents began to teach me children's songs when I am three.After I started school I had more chance to enjoy various songs and practiced singing a lot.I like singing English songs as well,which great benefits me in my learning of English.Practice make perfect.I have made great progress in singing and my efforts have paid up.Last year,I entered in a talent show and won a prize.I think we are all unique and have their advantages in some respects.I know my singing skills still need be further improved.I'm confident when I will serve our society with my songs in the future(在线灯,求详细解释)
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再问: 大神,你这是哪个改哪个?给列个顺序行不?
再答: 你对著原文有困难麼
再答: 好吧,1dreamed of becoming 2 my childhood 3 when i was4 had more chances 5greatly benefits 6 efforts have paid back7 entered a talent show 8 have our advantages9need to be10im confident that
再问: 有理由吗?给咱理由,立马采纳哦,亲(≧≦)
再答: of 後面加动名词构成介宾关系 since 後面是一个短语,用my构成短语 三岁时候是对过去的描述,用was chances复数形式 great 是形容词,因为benefit是动词,需要副词修饰,greatly 付出得到回报用pay back 而pay for是赔偿,补偿,偿还的意思 参加一个机构组织用不及物动词,不需要in 8 是指代错误,稍後指代不一致,need to do 所以在文中为need to be 最後一个是表语从句, confident 是表语
再问: 采纳了大神,有时间的话拜托给个理由,没有就算了,谢谢^_^
再答: 啊咧,理由不是都发过去了
再答: 刚才发的就是这麼改的原因呐
再答: 这就是理由呐