作业帮求修改一篇口语测试的自我介绍
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：作业帮 分类：英语作业 时间：2024/05/12 15:43:14
求修改一篇口语测试的自我介绍
Good afternoon,I am ZZH,an 18 years old boy from FuZhon.It is my pleasure to present myself in this test.As a contemporary college student,I am out-going and sporty.I enjoy exercising in my spare time,such as running and playing ball games.Football is my favorite one.Speaking of my family,it consists of 5 people --- my parents,my grandparents,and me!My family really love me and have given me lots of care.However,I did not live up to their expectation.I was admitted to XXX.Now,I am leading my university life,which could be very independence.Although I recognize that there are a number of differences between my present lifestyle and past studying lifestle,I will try my best to adapt to it.I believe I will reach a higher level with my continuous efforts.
contemporary college student- 你是想说现代大学生?我理解你的意思,但是在英文中这么说 doesn't make sense.
playing ball games- 我知道你想要说球类运动,但是在英文中它的意思的.蛋蛋的（男生下体.）游戏,你懂的,所以你要更具体一点
will reach a higher level - higher level of what?academic performance,extracurriculum activity?Be specific!
总体上我觉得你写的还不错.我看过很多中国学生写的作文,很多学生都试着用非常复杂sentence composition 但是基本都是错的,或者说出的意思是错的.我看你写的比较简单明了,所以错误率也低了一些.不过还有一些是你需要注意的.
contemporary college student- 你是想说现代大学生?我理解你的意思,但是在英文中这么说 doesn't make sense.
playing ball games- 我知道你想要说球类运动,但是在英文中它的意思的.蛋蛋的（男生下体.）游戏,你懂的,所以你要更具体一点
will reach a higher level - higher level of what?academic performance,extracurriculum activity?Be specific!
总体上我觉得你写的还不错.我看过很多中国学生写的作文,很多学生都试着用非常复杂sentence composition 但是基本都是错的,或者说出的意思是错的.我看你写的比较简单明了,所以错误率也低了一些.不过还有一些是你需要注意的.