英语文章修改主要是看一下我下面写的有没语病,语法是否正确,句子结构是否合理,帮我修改一下,使文章更加好.Through

英语文章修改
主要是看一下我下面写的有没语病,语法是否正确,句子结构是否合理,帮我修改一下,使文章更加好.Through studying bank letter,I have better understood the structure of the bank letter:a completely bank letter usually composed of the 14 parts.Among these 14parts,I know which is necessary ,which is optional.What’s more,I have learned of their respective function in a bank letter.Not only have I learned the structure of the bank letter,but have learned the layout of the bank letter.the block style,the indented style,and the semi- block style are the most commonly used styles.I will choose the most appropriate style for myself in writing bank letter according to different situation although now the most adopted one is block style for future.During learning the structure and layout of bank letter period,we have also learn some Top Banks in the World and title ,which will promote our professional learning .
Every time,I would sit in the front row,took down what you said is important,thought actively.Before my taking the lesson,I thought the lesson may be boring .After I genuinely join the lesson .the former though turns out to be wrong .The atmosphere of the class is very well,not like some other lessons,which will make you fell asleep .The process of learning gives me more than new knowledge,making me feel less-pressured and pleasured .In a break,an cartoon moving will be put on .making us more relax and improving the efficient of the study.After a semester learning of international bank letter,I have gained much,the structure and layout of bank letter,the writing rules,how to write bank letter of agency relationship or personal training ,some professional expressions.I believe that all of these we learned in bank letter will make a good foundation for my further studying .
分值不是很多,这个主要写的感受,

写的很好啊,没有什么病句