作业帮帮我看下这篇作文能得多少分,
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帮我看下这篇作文能得多少分,
NOW the most important and sad thing during the whole county is the earthquake happing in qinghai provide yushu city,Some people is alive,but some died for ever,some lose family and life .This allows us to know the nature of the terrible.In the past,we always think we are master of nature .But now ,we know the terrible of nature,so as students we should to help people go out dilemma and protection the earth.
帮我看时态对不对,上次因为时态问题,作文才得4分!还有帮我翻译下,看有没有错误的.
帮我看下有没有错误的
NOW the most important and sad thing during the whole county is the earthquake happing in qinghai provide yushu city,Some people is alive,but some died for ever,some lose family and life .This allows us to know the nature of the terrible.In the past,we always think we are master of nature .But now ,we know the terrible of nature,so as students we should to help people go out dilemma and protection the earth.
帮我看时态对不对,上次因为时态问题,作文才得4分!还有帮我翻译下,看有没有错误的.
帮我看下有没有错误的
总分多少?