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大神们帮我看看这篇雅思作文能得多少分
There is an increasing trend for people live
alone.What are the causes of this?Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays,a large
number of individuals work far away their home or do not get along well with
their family members.Thus,individuals in mounting number live alone especially
the old.It is certainly a negative trend in society.Individuals would be
well-advised to have more communication with their families.

It is not uncommon
that individuals live alnoe.They often include two kinds of people which are
the young and the old.The young live alone because they should work and the
work place is far away the home.Thus,they must live alone and do everything by
themselves.The young who live alone are always represented that they are
independent and have social skills.Another group ,the old,also do everything by
themselves.Most of them live alone because they cannot get along with their
families,Maybe their children are bored with them or they are keen on a quiet
environment.

Thus,individuals
woud be well-advised to make some solutions to solve this problem.The young
would be well-advised to have steady holidays which can let them come back the home or find a new job which is close to
their name.Nowadays,never is the issue concerning gap failing to attract our
eyes.The old may have little communication with their children.Thus, they would
be well-advised to move back to their home so that they can bring their
children and them close again.

In modern
society,different individuals live alone because of different reasons.Either
the young or the old would be well-advised to get along well with their
families and spend more time communicating with their family members.These
methods are also can boost a family relationship and make familes increasingly
harmonious.

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