作业帮帮我看下 英文有没有语法错误
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帮我看下 英文有没有语法错误
I'm a girl who like you from China.My name is Kaka.I'm one year old than you.I think you are a loving boy.There are many people liking you in China.I always think many things what you about.There are many things about you in my house,like glasses,bracelet...There are also some things what you like in my bedroom.I always find some news about you when i surf the internet.I am able to study English well.You are my greatest motivation!I have seen your photos that there are many medals in them.I think you are the best boy in the world.I'm always at your back in future.
The Christrmas Day was coming when i wroto this letter.So I hope that you could have a happy New Year.
请帮我看下有没有语法错误,如果有错,麻烦帮我改正一下,如果语序可以改,请帮下忙
我是一个来自中国旳喜欢你的女生,我比你小一岁.我觉得你是一个非常可爱的男孩.在中国,有很多人都喜欢你.
我经常想一些关于你的事情,我家有很多关于你的东西,比如杯子,手链还有照片.当我上网的时候 ,我会找一些关于你的新闻.我在你的照片上看到很多奖牌,我相信你是世界上最棒的男孩,我会永远支持你.我也会更加努力的去学习英语,你就是我最大的动力.当我写这封信的时候,圣诞节快到了,我希望你能有一个愉快的新年
大概意思，句子可能写得时候有些写错了
I'm a girl who like you from China.My name is Kaka.I'm one year old than you.I think you are a loving boy.There are many people liking you in China.I always think many things what you about.There are many things about you in my house,like glasses,bracelet...There are also some things what you like in my bedroom.I always find some news about you when i surf the internet.I am able to study English well.You are my greatest motivation!I have seen your photos that there are many medals in them.I think you are the best boy in the world.I'm always at your back in future.
The Christrmas Day was coming when i wroto this letter.So I hope that you could have a happy New Year.
请帮我看下有没有语法错误,如果有错,麻烦帮我改正一下,如果语序可以改,请帮下忙
我是一个来自中国旳喜欢你的女生,我比你小一岁.我觉得你是一个非常可爱的男孩.在中国,有很多人都喜欢你.
我经常想一些关于你的事情,我家有很多关于你的东西,比如杯子,手链还有照片.当我上网的时候 ,我会找一些关于你的新闻.我在你的照片上看到很多奖牌,我相信你是世界上最棒的男孩,我会永远支持你.我也会更加努力的去学习英语,你就是我最大的动力.当我写这封信的时候,圣诞节快到了,我希望你能有一个愉快的新年
大概意思，句子可能写得时候有些写错了
有几句话没怎么看没明白,就根据我的理解来试着帮你该一下吧!
就我看来,这是你写给你偶像的一封信吧,那格式需要改.
Dear 名（如Mike）,
My name is KaKa,who is one year older than you.I love you very much for I think you are a very lovely boy.There are many things about you in my house,glasses,bracelet and so on.I also collect some things you like in my bedroom.When surfing on the internet,I always look for all the news about you.Although my English is not good enough to express my feelings freely now,I will do the best of my ability to learn English,because you are my greatest motivation!
The Christmas Day is coming,and I hope you will have a happy new year.
At last,I want to say,"you are the best in the world,and I will support you forever!"
Yours,
KaKa
就我看来,这是你写给你偶像的一封信吧,那格式需要改.
Dear 名（如Mike）,
My name is KaKa,who is one year older than you.I love you very much for I think you are a very lovely boy.There are many things about you in my house,glasses,bracelet and so on.I also collect some things you like in my bedroom.When surfing on the internet,I always look for all the news about you.Although my English is not good enough to express my feelings freely now,I will do the best of my ability to learn English,because you are my greatest motivation!
The Christmas Day is coming,and I hope you will have a happy new year.
At last,I want to say,"you are the best in the world,and I will support you forever!"
Yours,
KaKa