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请帮我看下这篇文章有没有什么语法错误.请帮我指正,
In fact,I am not good at giving a speech in public.Needless to say that I am not a perfect person,or perhapes life itself is just a progress to perfection.
Everyone has their own dreams,and we’re all working hard to become the one we want to be.As for me(,As far as I'm concerned).I've had more dreams than I can even count since I can remember.As a child,I liked to paint,and wanted to become a painter,then I wanted to become a costume designer because I love to draw beautiful characters and their clothes.After that,I wanted to become a tourist guide,so then I can travel around for free.But all these dreams made me confused ,I was not very clear about which one I really want to be in the future.
But now,I’ve seemed to realize what I really want.
Of all the things that make me happy,I was aware that singing is what I like to do best.I sing for no particular purpose.In short,I sing for fun.There is no limit to what I sing,so long as it can let out my emotion and pass the pleasant voice to others.It is something more satisfactory and exciting to draw echoes from them.It is nothing bad to spread joy around,is it?As you can tell,singing is my second life.The music lets me feel comfortable and happy.
I must be responsible for myself no matter what I want to be and what I want to do.I am very grateful to my parents and my friends.we never know what life could bring.because nothing can last forever.we should be confident of our ability.we just need to hold on and believe that we can reach the top one day.
Finally,what I want to say is that we can just be one we wanna be .
In fact,I am not good at giving a speech in public.Needless to say that I am not a perfect person,or perhapes life itself is just a progress to perfection.
Everyone has their own dreams,and we’re all working hard to become the one we want to be.As for me(,As far as I'm concerned).I've had more dreams than I can even count since I can remember.As a child,I liked to paint,and wanted to become a painter,then I wanted to become a costume designer because I love to draw beautiful characters and their clothes.After that,I wanted to become a tourist guide,so then I can travel around for free.But all these dreams made me confused ,I was not very clear about which one I really want to be in the future.
But now,I’ve seemed to realize what I really want.
Of all the things that make me happy,I was aware that singing is what I like to do best.I sing for no particular purpose.In short,I sing for fun.There is no limit to what I sing,so long as it can let out my emotion and pass the pleasant voice to others.It is something more satisfactory and exciting to draw echoes from them.It is nothing bad to spread joy around,is it?As you can tell,singing is my second life.The music lets me feel comfortable and happy.
I must be responsible for myself no matter what I want to be and what I want to do.I am very grateful to my parents and my friends.we never know what life could bring.because nothing can last forever.we should be confident of our ability.we just need to hold on and believe that we can reach the top one day.
Finally,what I want to say is that we can just be one we wanna be .
we’re all working hard to become the one we want to be.
我认为最好改成过去完成进行时 have been working
Finally,what I want to say is that we can just be （the） one we wanna be .
个人见解.
我认为最好改成过去完成进行时 have been working
Finally,what I want to say is that we can just be （the） one we wanna be .
个人见解.