批改英语作文I'm a middle school student.My name is Fang Hua.I'm wr

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I'm a middle school student.My name is Fang Hua.I'm writing to ask you a question about how to communicate with deskmate
As for me,I'm good at sdudy,like to take with classmates.Besides,I am willing to help those in need,in a way,I maake a good relationship with others.My deskmate does study hard,obey school rules.However,His charcter isn't sunny,which make him too shy to communicate with people.Besides,he will lose his temper sometimes when meeting some incidents.
So what I should do to improve our relationship has disturbed me for a long a time.I sincerely hope that you can give me an answer as soon as possible

这应该是信吧?首先开头要有时间和DEAR_______.
几处语法错误：good at 只能就doing.（I'm good at sdudying）
like to take with classmates（此处缺主语,take应改为talk.）
My deskmate does study hard（does study连续两个动词出现,明显错误.应去掉does,study+s.）obey school rules（obey+S）
His charcter isn't sunny,which make him too shy to communicate with people.（连接词错误,如要用which应放在charcter后,此处应用it ,后面的make+s）
he will lose his temper sometimes when meeting some incidents.(此处的will lose不合理,说的是他的性格,也就是平常的状态.故应用一般现在时（loses)
what I should do to improve our relationship(improve用在此处不是很恰当.应改为make .better）
结尾处应对他/她表示感谢如：THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP
祝语
签名

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