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ackie Robinson is the first back man join the America baseball team.He was born on January 31,1919 in Cairo.When he was young,he has the innate for many games.He run fast as winds,power as tiger,and sharp as rabbit.The place Jackie born didn't have good community.The school don't care the color people,and most color can't even join the school.When Jackie's father left his home,Jackie's mom burying her children to California.A other reason is the California didn't have skin discrimination,any children can go to the school,and Jackie's mom even want Jackie Robinson go to the collage.During one day Jackie and his brother play the Olympics,and Jackie won his older brother.Jackie Robinson's nearby are the white skin family.During on day Jackie quarrels with their child,and white skin's father help his child.But white skin family's mom stop them and ask them do you think shy?
Jackie's first challenge is coming,for one time Jackie and his friends play a game,and they broke the fruit stall.So they meet a policeman.Jackie want fright with him,but when policeman tell him what happened when his mom see him go t the Jail,so Jackie stop.By 1938,Jackie tried many different game,and he acquired four letters i one season.
Finally by 1944 Jackie Robinson choose play the baseball in Negro Leagues.The Negro Leagues star by 1898.Jackie want join baseball team,but he can't because the skin discrimination.Branch Rick tell him the true about America baseball,but Jackie Robinson think it's not fair,he want change skin discrimination.And when the coach of Brooklyn Dodger see Jackie was play baseball he agree Ricky and Jackie Robinson join the team.And after many baseball race,finally he become Most Valuable Player,which mean the wonderful contribution.When he stars join Brooklyn Dodger many other players ignored him and Ricky,because the skin color.The newspaper write scornful and racist report about him,also it tell him promise don't against anyone,But Jackie Robinson didn't care,he keeps play and many person accept him.Jackie Robinson still remember the Rick always say to him:" Color didn't matter to fans f the black man is winner." And Jackie Robinson won many cup,people accept the color person.When he about 30 years old,he became a businessman,a civil right activist,and a father have three children.He work at NAACP.NAACP is the National Association for the Advancement of color People.He know many color people still need help.
On October 24 1972,when Jackie Robinson was 53 years old,he died.The died of a heart attack.
Jackie Robinson's life is short,but is very brilliant.He give fun and hope,he give us movie,book about him.And he give color people fair.Jackie Robinson was very great,no matter what is his skin color was,just matter how good he is.
ackie Robinson is the first back man join the America baseball team.He was born on January 31,1919 in Cairo.When he was young,he has the innate for many games.He run fast as winds,power as tiger,and sharp as rabbit.The place Jackie born didn't have good community.The school don't care the color people,and most color can't even join the school.When Jackie's father left his home,Jackie's mom burying her children to California.A other reason is the California didn't have skin discrimination,any children can go to the school,and Jackie's mom even want Jackie Robinson go to the collage.During one day Jackie and his brother play the Olympics,and Jackie won his older brother.Jackie Robinson's nearby are the white skin family.During on day Jackie quarrels with their child,and white skin's father help his child.But white skin family's mom stop them and ask them do you think shy?
Jackie's first challenge is coming,for one time Jackie and his friends play a game,and they broke the fruit stall.So they meet a policeman.Jackie want fright with him,but when policeman tell him what happened when his mom see him go t the Jail,so Jackie stop.By 1938,Jackie tried many different game,and he acquired four letters i one season.
Finally by 1944 Jackie Robinson choose play the baseball in Negro Leagues.The Negro Leagues star by 1898.Jackie want join baseball team,but he can't because the skin discrimination.Branch Rick tell him the true about America baseball,but Jackie Robinson think it's not fair,he want change skin discrimination.And when the coach of Brooklyn Dodger see Jackie was play baseball he agree Ricky and Jackie Robinson join the team.And after many baseball race,finally he become Most Valuable Player,which mean the wonderful contribution.When he stars join Brooklyn Dodger many other players ignored him and Ricky,because the skin color.The newspaper write scornful and racist report about him,also it tell him promise don't against anyone,But Jackie Robinson didn't care,he keeps play and many person accept him.Jackie Robinson still remember the Rick always say to him:" Color didn't matter to fans f the black man is winner." And Jackie Robinson won many cup,people accept the color person.When he about 30 years old,he became a businessman,a civil right activist,and a father have three children.He work at NAACP.NAACP is the National Association for the Advancement of color People.He know many color people still need help.
On October 24 1972,when Jackie Robinson was 53 years old,he died.The died of a heart attack.
Jackie Robinson's life is short,but is very brilliant.He give fun and hope,he give us movie,book about him.And he give color people fair.Jackie Robinson was very great,no matter what is his skin color was,just matter how good he is.
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Ackie Robinson is the first back man joins the America baseball team.He was born on January 31,1919 in Cairo.When he was young,he has the innate for many games.He runs fast as winds,power as tiger,and sharp as rabbit.The place Jackie born didn't have good community.The school doesn’t care the color people,and most color can't even join the school.When Jackie's father left his home,Jackie’s mom burying her children to California.Another reason is the California didn't have skin discrimination; any children can go to the school,and Jackie's mom even want Jackie Robinson go to the collage.During one day Jackie and his brother play the Olympics and Jackie won his older brother.Jackie Robinson's nearby are the white skin family.During on day Jackie quarrels with their child,and white skin's father help his child.But white skin family's mom stops them and asks them do you think shy?
Jackie's first challenge is coming,for one time Jackie and his friends play a game,and they broke the fruit stall.So they meet a policeman.Jackie want fright with him,but when policeman tell him what happened when his mom see him go t the Jail,so Jackie stop.By 1938,Jackie tried many different game,and he acquired four letters I one season.
Finally by 1944 Jackie Robinson chooses play the baseball in Negro Leagues.The Negro Leagues star by 1898.Jackie want join baseball team,but he can't because the skin discrimination.Branch Rick tell him the true about America baseball,but Jackie Robinson think it's not fair,he want change skin discrimination.And when the coach of Brooklyn Dodger see Jackie was play baseball he agrees Ricky and Jackie Robinson join the team.And after many baseball races,finally he become Most Valuable Player,which mean the wonderful contribution.When he stars join Brooklyn Dodger many other players ignored him and Ricky,because the skin color.The newspaper writes scornful and racist report about him,also it tells him promise doesn’t against anyone,But Jackie Robinson didn't care,he keeps play and many people accept him.Jackie Robinson still remembers the Rick always say to him:" Color didn't matter to fans f the black man is winner." And Jackie Robinson won many cup,people accept the color person.When he about 30 years old,he became a businessman,a civil right activist,and a father have three children.He works at NAACP.NAACP is the National Association for the Advancement of color People.He knows many color people still need help.
On October 24 1972,when Jackie Robinson was 53 years old,he died.
Jackie Robinson's life is short,but is very brilliant.He give fun and hope,he give us movie,book about him.And he gives color people fair.Jackie Robinson was very great,no matter what is his skin color was,just matter how good he is.
Ackie Robinson is the first back man joins the America baseball team.He was born on January 31,1919 in Cairo.When he was young,he has the innate for many games.He runs fast as winds,power as tiger,and sharp as rabbit.The place Jackie born didn't have good community.The school doesn’t care the color people,and most color can't even join the school.When Jackie's father left his home,Jackie’s mom burying her children to California.Another reason is the California didn't have skin discrimination; any children can go to the school,and Jackie's mom even want Jackie Robinson go to the collage.During one day Jackie and his brother play the Olympics and Jackie won his older brother.Jackie Robinson's nearby are the white skin family.During on day Jackie quarrels with their child,and white skin's father help his child.But white skin family's mom stops them and asks them do you think shy?
Jackie's first challenge is coming,for one time Jackie and his friends play a game,and they broke the fruit stall.So they meet a policeman.Jackie want fright with him,but when policeman tell him what happened when his mom see him go t the Jail,so Jackie stop.By 1938,Jackie tried many different game,and he acquired four letters I one season.
Finally by 1944 Jackie Robinson chooses play the baseball in Negro Leagues.The Negro Leagues star by 1898.Jackie want join baseball team,but he can't because the skin discrimination.Branch Rick tell him the true about America baseball,but Jackie Robinson think it's not fair,he want change skin discrimination.And when the coach of Brooklyn Dodger see Jackie was play baseball he agrees Ricky and Jackie Robinson join the team.And after many baseball races,finally he become Most Valuable Player,which mean the wonderful contribution.When he stars join Brooklyn Dodger many other players ignored him and Ricky,because the skin color.The newspaper writes scornful and racist report about him,also it tells him promise doesn’t against anyone,But Jackie Robinson didn't care,he keeps play and many people accept him.Jackie Robinson still remembers the Rick always say to him:" Color didn't matter to fans f the black man is winner." And Jackie Robinson won many cup,people accept the color person.When he about 30 years old,he became a businessman,a civil right activist,and a father have three children.He works at NAACP.NAACP is the National Association for the Advancement of color People.He knows many color people still need help.
On October 24 1972,when Jackie Robinson was 53 years old,he died.
Jackie Robinson's life is short,but is very brilliant.He give fun and hope,he give us movie,book about him.And he gives color people fair.Jackie Robinson was very great,no matter what is his skin color was,just matter how good he is.