作业帮老师，帮我评改一下作文。
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题目： 你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广播中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。为使美国朋友听懂，请你用英语写一篇广播通知。要点如下： 宗旨：欢迎来访的美国朋友 组织者：学生会 时间： 8月15日(星期六) 晚7: 30 地点：主楼屋顶花园 活动内容：音乐、跳舞、唱歌、游戏、交换小礼品(请包装好、签名并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词) 注意： (1) 广播稿约100词。 (2) 应包括以上要点，但不要逐字翻译，要组织成一篇通顺连贯的短文。 生词：交换礼品—to exchange gifts 学生会—the Student Union Boys and girls ,may I have your attention please? As we know, we will hold a party for our American friends who will visit us soon,to welcome them.It's all organized by the Student Union,they have done a lot of things prepaaing for it . The party will begin at 7:30,15th,August (Satuafay) at the garden of the main building.In addtion, there will be singing ,dancing, games.Also, will change gifts,so, don't forget to pack your gift up,and with a few words of best wishes and your name on it. Have fun! That's all,thank you. roof garden,没写上，还有 the garden of the main building， 定冠词有多余吗？ 其他的错误辛苦老师了， ３０分的作文，这个能得多少啊？
解题思路： 评改作文,３０分的作文可打16-20分
解题过程：
Boys and girls ,
May I have your attention, please? Inorder to welcome American friends, the Student Union is going to hold a party for our American friends at 7:30,15th,August (Saturday) at the roof gardenof the main building.
All the students are welcome to the party. You can sing ,dance, play games and change gifts with the American friends,but don't forget to pack your gift up and write a few words of best wishes. And please write down your name on it.
Have fun!
That's all,thank you.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Boys and girls ,
May I have your attention, please? Inorder to welcome American friends, the Student Union is going to hold a party for our American friends at 7:30,15th,August (Saturday) at the roof gardenof the main building.
All the students are welcome to the party. You can sing ,dance, play games and change gifts with the American friends,but don't forget to pack your gift up and write a few words of best wishes. And please write down your name on it.
Have fun!
That's all,thank you.
最终答案：略