作业帮初三英语作文请老师评改
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书表表达：假如你叫李华，你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论，主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息，用英语总结出讨论情况。 提示： 60%的学生 40%的学生 应该每天进行体育锻炼，但不要时间过长 锻炼浪费时间，使人疲劳 锻炼能增强体质，保持健康 锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能投入学习 锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好 锻炼中可能会受伤 要求：语句通顺，句意连贯；词数为80词左右；信的开头已写好，但不计入总词数。 After the discussion we found that 60% students think we are should be do more exercise everyday , but not any long time . And they think do more exercise make us strong and keep healthy,too . Then they think if you want to study well,you must do exercise . Because it can we relaxed and make take a rest for our head. Do you think so ? However,about 40% students against those students standpoint . They think do exercise make our tied and waste our study time . And they think after do more exercise can make us exciting and need long time throw into study . It is important for hurt to our bady . And if our really hurt , we will not study , just take a rest . But in my opinion , do more exercise can keep us healthy and make our look at energetic .
解题思路： 观点明确，层次清晰，内容完整。但是表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。
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After the discussion we found that 60% students think we （are去掉） should （be去掉） do more exercise every day , but not spend too long time . And they think doing more exercise makes them strong and keep them healthy ,too .
Then they think if they want to study well,they must do exercise . Because it can make them relax and take a rest for our head. Do you think so ?
However,about 40% students are against those students’ standpoint . They think doing exercise makes them tired and waste their study time . And they think after doing more exercise,they are too excited for a long time to focus on their study . It is possible to be hurt . And if they really hurt , they will not study , just take a rest .
But in my opinion , doing more exercise can keep us healthy and make us energetic .
最终答案：略
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After the discussion we found that 60% students think we （are去掉） should （be去掉） do more exercise every day , but not spend too long time . And they think doing more exercise makes them strong and keep them healthy ,too .
Then they think if they want to study well,they must do exercise . Because it can make them relax and take a rest for our head. Do you think so ?
However,about 40% students are against those students’ standpoint . They think doing exercise makes them tired and waste their study time . And they think after doing more exercise,they are too excited for a long time to focus on their study . It is possible to be hurt . And if they really hurt , they will not study , just take a rest .
But in my opinion , doing more exercise can keep us healthy and make us energetic .
最终答案：略