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帮忙看看这段英文自我介绍写的有没有语法问题,
帮忙看看这段英文自我介绍写的有没有语法问题,这是去面试用的,需要一个简单的自我介绍,这是我自己写的,英文不好,怕有语法问题,或者提供一些更好的自我介绍也可以,简短一些不超过十句话,
Hello everybody,my name is ***,I am ** yearsold,I live in the Fengtai District Liujiayao,My hobby is reading,I am lively and cheerful character,honest,enthusiastic,I seriously meticulous in their work,patience,and have a good team spirit.
Thank you for giving me this opportunity.
Hello everybody,my name is ***.I am ** years old.I live in the Fengtai District Liujiayao.My hobby is reading.(这里可以再加一些,否则显得比较单调)I am an outgoing(LZ,如果要表达活泼的话,outgoing比较地道), honest and enthusiastic girl,who is serious about working.My friends often say that they feel happy to cooperate with me,because I'm pretty patient.(借助外人的客观评价看,显得比较真实)最后可以加一句名言,表现自己的理想或志向等(例如,I believe that what doesn't destroy you will only make you stronger或者I believe that if I can see it,I will be it等)
Thank you for giving me this opportunity.
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