作业帮帮我看看这段对 a teens 的英文介绍有什么语法问题?
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帮我看看这段对 a teens 的英文介绍有什么语法问题?
From Sweden's A-Teens (Abba Youth Group)is composed of Marie Serneholt (Mary,17 years old),Amit Paul (Ai-Ming,17 years old),Sara Lumholdt (Sarah,16 years old) and Dhani Lennevald (Dani,16).
The first song ,‘Mamma Mia’.It only took a week to break sales records in Sweden.
I like their song,‘fire fly’.It comes from their album ,《teen spirit》.They released this album in 2001.
From Sweden's A-Teens (Abba Youth Group)is composed of Marie Serneholt (Mary,17 years old),Amit Paul (Ai-Ming,17 years old),Sara Lumholdt (Sarah,16 years old) and Dhani Lennevald (Dani,16).
The first song ,‘Mamma Mia’.It only took a week to break sales records in Sweden.
I like their song,‘fire fly’.It comes from their album ,《teen spirit》.They released this album in 2001.
第一段没有问题.
第二段那句话有comma splice的问题,是一个断句.
应改为：their first song,"Mamma Mia",only took one week to break the sales record in Sweden.
(注意我把it去掉了,不然是错误的）
第三段有小错误.
你确定是fire fly还是fireflies?(不是owl city的fireflies)
还有最好用 they have released this album since 2001.
保持整段都用同样的时态.你前面用了现在时,后面却用了过去式.最好不要这样使用.如果在SAT上怎么写,会被扣分的 :)
第二段那句话有comma splice的问题,是一个断句.
应改为：their first song,"Mamma Mia",only took one week to break the sales record in Sweden.
(注意我把it去掉了,不然是错误的）
第三段有小错误.
你确定是fire fly还是fireflies?(不是owl city的fireflies)
还有最好用 they have released this album since 2001.
保持整段都用同样的时态.你前面用了现在时,后面却用了过去式.最好不要这样使用.如果在SAT上怎么写,会被扣分的 :)