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帮忙做一道英语改错题yesterday l went to my friend home ,and she told m

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帮忙做一道英语改错题
yesterday l went to my friend home ,and she told me a good news ,she said :"in order to welcome American friends ,our school decide to hold an evening party .we can listen music ,dance ,sing and play games at the party .we are expected to prepare some gift for the foreign friends ,and have our gifts wrapping and write down our names and wishes on the package .the party will held at 7p.m on august 18th in the reading room .everybody is welcome to join in the party ,"hearing the gone news ,i was very exciting .i think there will be a good chance for me to talk with foreigners with English .
共10处错误
friend home --friend's home
a good news ---去掉a
decide---decided
listen music ---listen to music
some gift ---some gifts
wrapping--wrapped
are expected ---去掉are
will held ---will be held
i was very exciting ----i was very excited
with English .---in english