我写了一篇英语作文,请您帮我批一下吧,Dear Mr Smith,On

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我写了一篇英语作文,请您帮我批一下吧,Dear Mr Smith,On
我写了一篇英语作文,请您帮我批一下吧,Dear Mr Smith,On behalf of the students of our class,I e-mail you telling you how we feel about your first week teaching in our class.There is no doubt that you are a kind teacher who is always willing to help us.（必需加be动词吗）You are thought highly of by all of us.（这句没有错吧?） As you know,English has always been our headache and we are trying every means to improve it but have little good result.What is more,being your student,we are absorbed in your special and lively teaching measures（教学方法,是中式英语）吗which make us active in your class.To us delight ,not only have you a lot of knowledge but also you are patience to us .But some of us are still poor at English and need your help.We hope that you can know what they most need in English study and get them more interested in English by telling stories,sing songs,playing games and so on.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

滴二行的first week 要加上‘s 才对喔.第三行必须加be动词,因为愿意做某事的句型是be willing to do sth.后面那一句对老师评价高最好是改成主动句. 第五行的那个little是表示几乎没有的意思,你们不可能学英语这么久什么都没学到吧,要改成a little. 倒数第四行patient不是patience . 倒数第三行应该改成and we need your help,也就是加了一个we,因为这个后半句是和前面并列要注意.倒数第二行的get改为make更好.sing改为singing,因为要用动词ing的形式 earliest是表示
最早的意思,不符合句意要删掉,不然要闹笑话的.总体来说写得还不错

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