作业帮谁帮我看看我这篇英语小作文?见笑了.
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谁帮我看看我这篇英语小作文?见笑了.
The school talent show was a great success.Vera was the most creative performer.She played the guitar upside down.The prize for the loudest performer was won by the Math Teathers.There was also a prize for the worst performer.Unluckily,it went to Dennis.He wanted to juggle.But he couldn't juggle at all.So he did a bad job
帮我说说这篇文章有何不足之处好改正
首先我想说我的第一句是书上的原话
并且She played the guitar upside down也是书上的原话意思是：她倒立着弹吉他
The school talent show was a great success.Vera was the most creative performer.She played the guitar upside down.The prize for the loudest performer was won by the Math Teathers.There was also a prize for the worst performer.Unluckily,it went to Dennis.He wanted to juggle.But he couldn't juggle at all.So he did a bad job
帮我说说这篇文章有何不足之处好改正
首先我想说我的第一句是书上的原话
并且She played the guitar upside down也是书上的原话意思是：她倒立着弹吉他
She played the guitar upside down.——咱知道LZ是想说“她玩吉他玩得像翻过来一样溜”..但是upside down在英文里只有倒过来和一团糟的意思..这里建议改改..太Chinenglish了...可以说她是个brilliant guitar player或者skilful也可以..=.=..