作业帮帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误
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帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误
There are some ways on saving our enironment:firstly,we can go to school on foot.It is free and it is a kind of exercise.Secondly,we must turn off the lights of our classroonm when we leave the room.Thirdly,remember to turn off the tap.Forthly,do not use the plastic bag.It is can not be reused.Fifthly,try using both sides of the paper.The last way of savingour environment is sorting garbage into glass,plastic,paper……
It is our duty to make our environment more and more beautiful in the future
初二英语考试的时候写的10分满分，一个错误一分看看能减几分
注：classroom,environment打错了,can not是can't,第三行是it can't be reused
There are some ways on saving our enironment:firstly,we can go to school on foot.It is free and it is a kind of exercise.Secondly,we must turn off the lights of our classroonm when we leave the room.Thirdly,remember to turn off the tap.Forthly,do not use the plastic bag.It is can not be reused.Fifthly,try using both sides of the paper.The last way of savingour environment is sorting garbage into glass,plastic,paper……
It is our duty to make our environment more and more beautiful in the future
初二英语考试的时候写的10分满分，一个错误一分看看能减几分
注：classroom,environment打错了,can not是can't,第三行是it can't be reused
国际惯例,所有的文章先过一遍英文纠错工具,见图：
我看了下,软件基本都改的是对的,就是第二遍修改的时候会发现on改成to以后,saving要改成save.
接下来,来说一些语法正确,但是写的还不够好的地方：
1. 你的firstly, secondly都有主语we引导,但是后面开始没有主语了,不一致.
2. forthly, the plastic bag 后面可以用which引导从句,把后面那句连起来.
3. fifthly那句 其实 paper并不是特指的,用the不合适.
4. sorting garbage后面可以再加上and recycling them
大致的看是这些,具体的可以再修改,因为不知道这篇文章要求的程度（小学,初中,高中,大学）所以也没法说的很到位.
我看了下,软件基本都改的是对的,就是第二遍修改的时候会发现on改成to以后,saving要改成save.
接下来,来说一些语法正确,但是写的还不够好的地方：
1. 你的firstly, secondly都有主语we引导,但是后面开始没有主语了,不一致.
2. forthly, the plastic bag 后面可以用which引导从句,把后面那句连起来.
3. fifthly那句 其实 paper并不是特指的,用the不合适.
4. sorting garbage后面可以再加上and recycling them
大致的看是这些,具体的可以再修改,因为不知道这篇文章要求的程度（小学,初中,高中,大学）所以也没法说的很到位.