作业帮英语自我介绍（请帮忙修改）
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英语自我介绍（请帮忙修改）
要参加一个口语的测试,写了篇自我介绍.有点前言不搭后语的感觉,大概还有很多语法错误,希望帮忙修改下.
http://hi.baidu.com/%B0%D7%D2%B9%CE%AA%B8%E8/blog/item/21d46672a9a5f5158701b0d1.html
要参加一个口语的测试,写了篇自我介绍.有点前言不搭后语的感觉,大概还有很多语法错误,希望帮忙修改下.
http://hi.baidu.com/%B0%D7%D2%B9%CE%AA%B8%E8/blog/item/21d46672a9a5f5158701b0d1.html
朋友：
我大致地看了一下你的文章,帮你修改了一下.
Good morning!
It is my pleasure to have this opportunity for the interview.I hope I can make a great performance today.I am confident that I can be succeessful.
Now I will introduce myself.
My name is Wang Xiaodi.In Chinese language,"Xiao" means “natural and unrestrained”and”di “is a kind of herbal medicine,it’s very useful.The name shows my parents’ expectation and best wishes.
I am 16 years old.According to Chinese Zodiac Signs,my sign is rooster.Like the rooster ,I am outgoing 、soulful 、organized and I have leadership experience.Since Grade 2,I have been the monitor of the class,the teachers and my classmates had trustd me and liked me very much.They say I’m easy to get along with.If they have any questions,they usually talk to me for help.
My school days are very regular,maybe not very relaxing but substantial.My favorte subjects are Chinese 、English and Chemistry.These courses help me to learn cultures and mysteries of the world.I think math and physics are challenging,they make me feel exctied.
In my free time ,I Iike reading.It enables me to get to know a more beautiful world.For example,I like Jules-Verne.He shows us how a great man’s fancy would be!I also like Tagore,I hope I can have a life which reflects to his poem “Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves.”I like drawing,I have learned drawing for many years.I have won prizes for my paintings.
I have a balanced eating habit and a healthy body.I love swimming;also I’m learning yoga.Maybe I can’t run very fast ,but I have perseverance,I believe ”Never give up” and It helps me to reach the best of my abilities .
In these days,I am reading a book.It says “Most people are not necessarily to a particular stage,but all the stages that he goes are the best ones.”For whatever I am enduring,I would try my best and make my own stage in my life.
Thank you for listening to my presentation.
这篇文章写得还不错,词汇方面我给你改了很多,还有语法.
小妹妹,你不妨努力练习自己的写作,让自己更上一层楼.
也许我可以帮你,你可以不断地写自己的文章,然后发到我的邮箱,我们一起进步.我天天都会查邮件的.
希望能够帮到你..
我大致地看了一下你的文章,帮你修改了一下.
Good morning!
It is my pleasure to have this opportunity for the interview.I hope I can make a great performance today.I am confident that I can be succeessful.
Now I will introduce myself.
My name is Wang Xiaodi.In Chinese language,"Xiao" means “natural and unrestrained”and”di “is a kind of herbal medicine,it’s very useful.The name shows my parents’ expectation and best wishes.
I am 16 years old.According to Chinese Zodiac Signs,my sign is rooster.Like the rooster ,I am outgoing 、soulful 、organized and I have leadership experience.Since Grade 2,I have been the monitor of the class,the teachers and my classmates had trustd me and liked me very much.They say I’m easy to get along with.If they have any questions,they usually talk to me for help.
My school days are very regular,maybe not very relaxing but substantial.My favorte subjects are Chinese 、English and Chemistry.These courses help me to learn cultures and mysteries of the world.I think math and physics are challenging,they make me feel exctied.
In my free time ,I Iike reading.It enables me to get to know a more beautiful world.For example,I like Jules-Verne.He shows us how a great man’s fancy would be!I also like Tagore,I hope I can have a life which reflects to his poem “Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves.”I like drawing,I have learned drawing for many years.I have won prizes for my paintings.
I have a balanced eating habit and a healthy body.I love swimming;also I’m learning yoga.Maybe I can’t run very fast ,but I have perseverance,I believe ”Never give up” and It helps me to reach the best of my abilities .
In these days,I am reading a book.It says “Most people are not necessarily to a particular stage,but all the stages that he goes are the best ones.”For whatever I am enduring,I would try my best and make my own stage in my life.
Thank you for listening to my presentation.
这篇文章写得还不错,词汇方面我给你改了很多,还有语法.
小妹妹,你不妨努力练习自己的写作,让自己更上一层楼.
也许我可以帮你,你可以不断地写自己的文章,然后发到我的邮箱,我们一起进步.我天天都会查邮件的.
希望能够帮到你..