作业帮帮忙修改一下英文自我介绍
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帮忙修改一下英文自我介绍
作文如下：
Hello everyone.I'm glad to speak here,and thank you for giving me this changce.
My name is Linda.I'm 12 years old
I think bule is my lucky color.I like Detective Conan best.I want to go to Japan one day .Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
My motto is "You are never to young to doing things"
_______________________________(加一个过渡句）
For exanple,…………………………………………（许多成功人士的事例）
They are very succes.______________________（我十分佩服他们）
Thank you.
要求：再添加一个过渡句.
另外检查本人作文中有什么不妥（语法、单词等）
提出建议.
作文如下：
Hello everyone.I'm glad to speak here,and thank you for giving me this changce.
My name is Linda.I'm 12 years old
I think bule is my lucky color.I like Detective Conan best.I want to go to Japan one day .Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
My motto is "You are never to young to doing things"
_______________________________(加一个过渡句）
For exanple,…………………………………………（许多成功人士的事例）
They are very succes.______________________（我十分佩服他们）
Thank you.
要求：再添加一个过渡句.
另外检查本人作文中有什么不妥（语法、单词等）
提出建议.
I want to go to Japan one day .后面的那个one day 应该去掉.
Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
the 去掉,japanese改成japan,Japanese是日本人,日语的意思,你这句话的意思应该是：因为日本有很多好看的动漫吧?动漫是可数名词吗?如果是就要加s了.
.我的水平很烂,只能改到这地步了.sorry
Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
the 去掉,japanese改成japan,Japanese是日本人,日语的意思,你这句话的意思应该是：因为日本有很多好看的动漫吧?动漫是可数名词吗?如果是就要加s了.
.我的水平很烂,只能改到这地步了.sorry