作业帮求高手帮忙修改英语自我介绍并补充
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求高手帮忙修改英语自我介绍并补充
Huy,Lotus’s here.If you ask me why I come here,I would say I want to find a way to make myself strong and firm.I was a recommeneded student for Xuejun high school,which is one of the best schools in Hangzhou.But finally I chose to be here,for getting better education abroad.Though I talk little,I’m a easygoing guy,and I will do diligent work for my aims.My style of writing is well,I also have my own novel which is followed by many people.I’m learning tennis and I found it a good way to relieve myself and make my body stronger.Sometiome I make mistakes for just my carelessness.I also have a naughty side,like little kids,I love animation and comics.At my spare time,besides finishing tasks,I enjoy reading and listening to musics.My favorite novel is 《pride and prejudice》.I once served as secretary of the Study Department for the Student Union in my middle school.(曾获得是作文三等奖和各种校内奖项如三好学生优秀干部，成绩在校内名列前茅，然后结尾。)
Huy,Lotus’s here.If you ask me why I come here,I would say I want to find a way to make myself strong and firm.I was a recommeneded student for Xuejun high school,which is one of the best schools in Hangzhou.But finally I chose to be here,for getting better education abroad.Though I talk little,I’m a easygoing guy,and I will do diligent work for my aims.My style of writing is well,I also have my own novel which is followed by many people.I’m learning tennis and I found it a good way to relieve myself and make my body stronger.Sometiome I make mistakes for just my carelessness.I also have a naughty side,like little kids,I love animation and comics.At my spare time,besides finishing tasks,I enjoy reading and listening to musics.My favorite novel is 《pride and prejudice》.I once served as secretary of the Study Department for the Student Union in my middle school.(曾获得是作文三等奖和各种校内奖项如三好学生优秀干部，成绩在校内名列前茅，然后结尾。)
hey ,Lotus’s here.If you ask me why I come here,I would say that I want to find a way to make myself strong and firm,(此处你想表达是强大的话,用Strong 就可以咯） I was recommeneded to Xuejun high school(此处你想表达你被推荐给XX学校?）,which is one of the best schools in Hangzhou.But finally I chose to come here,I think i can get better education abroad and excercise myself in more aspects.I talk little but i am not introverted.I’m an easygoing guy,and I will try my best to achieve my aims.I do well in writing and have my own special writing style.I also have my own novel which is followed by many people.I’m learning tennis and I find that it is a good way to relax myself (放松自己）and make me stronger.Sometiomes (有时 是sometimes) I make mistakes by my carelessness.And I have a naughty side.I like little kids and I love animation and comics.In my spare time(空余时间用In).I enjoy reading and listening to musics after finishing my tasks.My favorite novel is 《pride and prejudice》.I once served as secretary of the Study Department for the Student Union in my middle school.And I won the third prize in writing and lots of school awards ,such as Good students and Outstanding cadres.I become the best student in my school through my unremitting efforts,plz take a consideration of my application ,I will study harder if you can accept my application ,and plz accept my deeppest apprecaition.Thanks for your time ,Good Day
时间有限大致看了下,你这应该是申请学校的自我介绍,我提点建议,写出来的自我介绍要让别人很快了解你,语言要通俗点,不用很繁琐,最主要是人家能看懂你的意思,.而且要多突出你的能力,这些你自己再结合自己的自身情况稍作修改就可以了
时间有限大致看了下,你这应该是申请学校的自我介绍,我提点建议,写出来的自我介绍要让别人很快了解你,语言要通俗点,不用很繁琐,最主要是人家能看懂你的意思,.而且要多突出你的能力,这些你自己再结合自己的自身情况稍作修改就可以了