作业帮英语高手进（帮我改篇作文）
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英语高手进（帮我改篇作文）
T-Mac is a talented player.During his peak,he was able to do anything he wanted to,so nobody could prevent his offence.Ever,his slam dunks suprised everyone,which made me like his playing style.But after he suffered from various injuries,he became weaker.His body didn't permit his doing pretty actions anymore.He had to absent most games.It's injuries that limit his ability.Nerver did he give in to destiny.But why is t-mac distructed by so many people?When tmac absents games,people call tmac "Cui Xi".When tmac gets low points and rockets loses games,media claims tmac is not worthy of his 20 million salary.I am very sad,because even fans who like tmac deeply ever,don't believe tmac either.If Tmac had kobe's luck,he would have four champions.If tmac were healthy now,he would have done what kobe had done.But tmac you don't feel sad,our true fans will stand for you forever
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T-Mac is a talented player.During his peak,he was able to do anything he wanted to,so nobody could prevent his offence.Ever,his slam dunks suprised everyone,which made me like his playing style.But after he suffered from various injuries,he became weaker.His body didn't permit his doing pretty actions anymore.He had to absent most games.It's injuries that limit his ability.Nerver did he give in to destiny.But why is t-mac distructed by so many people?When tmac absents games,people call tmac "Cui Xi".When tmac gets low points and rockets loses games,media claims tmac is not worthy of his 20 million salary.I am very sad,because even fans who like tmac deeply ever,don't believe tmac either.If Tmac had kobe's luck,he would have four champions.If tmac were healthy now,he would have done what kobe had done.But tmac you don't feel sad,our true fans will stand for you forever
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第3句 he was able to do anything he wanted to (do).(beacuse)no body could prevent his offence.
His slam dunks surprised everyone,(it) made me (fall in love with) his playing style.
跳过一句 He became (more and more) weaker.
When T-MAC gets low pionts and (the) rockets lose games.
don't believe in T-MAC (anymore).
But T-MAC you don't (have to be) sad beacuse (your) true fans will stand (behind) you forever.
打括号的是改的地方.
His slam dunks surprised everyone,(it) made me (fall in love with) his playing style.
跳过一句 He became (more and more) weaker.
When T-MAC gets low pionts and (the) rockets lose games.
don't believe in T-MAC (anymore).
But T-MAC you don't (have to be) sad beacuse (your) true fans will stand (behind) you forever.
打括号的是改的地方.