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我很用心写的,过去式方面有点乱
My happy National Day
Today is the first day of the National Day holiday,I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people in the running,then join them.Ran for a while,we sat in the chair to rest and chat.We soon became good friends.
At afternoon,My best friend's birthday party will begin.I do not know what gift to send to him.My sister gave me some good recommendations,she said "You can give him a birthday card,or a pair of sunglasses." I think that gave him a scarf is a good idea,so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party.
At evening,I sang a song at the party,my friend was very happy.
This is my happy National Day,I can't forget the day.I like my happy National Day!
我很用心写的,过去式方面有点乱
My happy National Day
Today is the first day of the National Day holiday,I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people in the running,then join them.Ran for a while,we sat in the chair to rest and chat.We soon became good friends.
At afternoon,My best friend's birthday party will begin.I do not know what gift to send to him.My sister gave me some good recommendations,she said "You can give him a birthday card,or a pair of sunglasses." I think that gave him a scarf is a good idea,so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party.
At evening,I sang a song at the party,my friend was very happy.
This is my happy National Day,I can't forget the day.I like my happy National Day!
My happy National Day
Today is the first day of the National Day I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people running,then join them.Ran for a while,we sat in the chair to rest and chat.We became good friends soon.
My best friend's birthday party began at afternoonn.I did’t know to send to himwhat gift .My sister gave me some good recommendations,she said "You can give him a birthday card,or a pair of sunglasses." I think that gave him a scarf is a good idea,so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party.
At evening,I sang a song at the party,my friend was very happy.
This is my happy National Day,I can't forget the day.
I like my happy National Day!
再问： she said" You can give him a birthday card, or a pair of sunglasses." I think that gave him a scarf is a good idea, so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party. 这个不用过去式？
再答： she said" You can give him a birthday card, or a pair of sunglasses." I thought that give him a scarf is a good idea, so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party. 说的话可以不用过去时
再问： 谢谢。
再答： 应该的 但是你需要用心看哦 好好学习
Today is the first day of the National Day I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people running,then join them.Ran for a while,we sat in the chair to rest and chat.We became good friends soon.
My best friend's birthday party began at afternoonn.I did’t know to send to himwhat gift .My sister gave me some good recommendations,she said "You can give him a birthday card,or a pair of sunglasses." I think that gave him a scarf is a good idea,so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party.
At evening,I sang a song at the party,my friend was very happy.
This is my happy National Day,I can't forget the day.
I like my happy National Day!
再问： she said" You can give him a birthday card, or a pair of sunglasses." I think that gave him a scarf is a good idea, so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party. 这个不用过去式？
再答： she said" You can give him a birthday card, or a pair of sunglasses." I thought that give him a scarf is a good idea, so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party. 说的话可以不用过去时
再问： 谢谢。
再答： 应该的 但是你需要用心看哦 好好学习