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看看这段英文自我评价有没有语病?
几个选择我的理由:
·个人对传统型、社会型职业的兴趣趋向;
·个性沉稳,踏实.职业规划定位明确,从基层做起;
·对于工作和生活的激情,具有方向性和持续性;
·具备财会工作专业基础,且实习期积累了相关工作经验;
·请相信我的学力和努力将会不断提升财务工作能力
A few of reason that you choose me:
* individual traditional community-based vocational interest trends;
* personality calm,at ease.Career planning position clear,from the grassroots level;
* For work and passion for life,with the direction and continuity;
* Have the basis of professional accounting work,and internship gained relevant work experience;
* Please believe me the abilities and efforts will continue to enhance the financial ability to work.
有挺多小错误的,尽量帮您一一修改下
比较恰当的翻译如下:
A few of reasons why/for which you choose me:
(其实这句用my advantage overothers lies in:更好些,
意思为,相比较而言,我的优势在于)
1.personal interest trends for traditional community-based vacation.
2.personal character:clam, down to earth. in addition,having a specific career planning
3.my passion for work and life is continuous with a specific direction.
4.having a professional base for accouting work, accumulated working experience
during the internship.
5.please believe that my financial/accounting work ability will be improved though my continuous efforts.
可以参考下,希望对你有帮助~~
不懂得还可以问我哦,很乐意解答~~O(∩_∩)O~