麻烦各位英语高手帮我看一下这篇文章的语法和部分时态的错误,指出以便改正,

麻烦各位英语高手帮我看一下这篇文章的语法和部分时态的错误,指出以便改正,
Adam Lambert-my favorite singer
Ilove music very much,and Adam Lambert is my favorit singer,I love him and he's songs.I think Adam Lambert and he's songs are prefact!
He was born in 1982,he entered for a show progranm in 2009,but he won the second prize in this competition.What a large pity!But they said that he was the best singer in this competition's history,and he is better than the first singer!
He has three disc now,but my favorite disc is 《season 8 favorit performances》.Wo!It's really great!Those songs aren't his,but I think he sings better than former sings.And my favorite songs are《Feeling good 》《Mad world》《the tracks of my tears》……They are all wonderful!
Afew days ago,he sang the 《time foe miracles》for 《2012》,It was really good to listen and moved!I think it was a great success!And the song's key was really high.
I think he is too handsome,his eyes is really beautiful,and he is tall.I love him very much!
I think he is the greatest singer.I hope everyone likes him!
不好意思啊，我现在只是初二，这是我们老师叫我们写的，我们的语法还没有学那么多，如果是中式英语，请多多包含

那两个人改的都不行,拼写错误都没帮你改.根据初二的水平,我帮你全部修改了一下,应该不会过头.
Adam Lambert,my favorite singer
I love music very much.And Adam Lambert is my favourite singer.I love him and his songs.I think both himself and his songs are perfect!
He was born in 1982.He took part in a competition show in 2009.But he only won the second prize.What a pity!But many people said that he was the best singer in the competition ever; And he was better than the singer who won the first prize!
He has three published album now.My favorite one is "Season 8 Favourite Performances".Wow!It's really great!Those songs aren't sung by him at first,but I think he sings better than the former one.My favourite songs are "Feeling good","Mad world","the tracks of my tears" and so on.They are all wonderful!
A few days ago,he sang the "time for miracles" for the movie,"2012".It was really good to listen and I was moved!I think it was a great success.The song's key is really high.
I think he is very handsome.His eyes are really beautiful.And he is tall.I love him very much!
I think he is the greatest singer.I hope everyone likes him.
我从头到尾改了一遍,可能还会有些许疏漏,但是基本上没问题了.记住段与段之间最好隔一行,每段都顶头写.不要用书名号,用引号.注意单复数.时态还是把我的不错的.另外,少用and,really和感叹号.最好不要用Wow这样的纯口语.建议对照你原来的仔细看一遍,对你会帮助大一些.祝学习顺利!