英语作文在线点评修改一下我的作文：My dream lifein the future ,i will be very

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英语作文在线点评
修改一下我的作文：My dream life
in the future ,i will be very beautiful .i will go to work by car so i will be very happen everyday .i will live in a big and elegant house with my parents ,in my home,has a robort,it will be do dull jobs everyday .On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.Go to there is my dream.What about you?

happen everyday 改为：happy every day 每天很快乐（ everyday每日的）
in my home,has a robort改为：There will be a robot in my house.= There is going to be a robot in my house.= We will have a robot in my house.
it will be do dull jobs everyday 改为：It will do dull jobs for us every day.( will + 动词原形,be/ do 不能用在一起）
On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.-改为：We'll go to Sydney Opera House to spend our holiday.或者用：During our holiday,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.
Go to there is my dream改为：Going there is my dream.( 用动名词做主语,there前省略to) 或者改为：Because I am looking forward to going there for a long time.

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