作业帮请各位高明人士茬临指导!
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请各位高明人士茬临指导!
请修改一下文章,请改正语法错误,并且请把你认为好的语句替换.急…如果好的话会有加分的!
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Hello teachers!Today,I’d like to share with you my product designed by myself.As we know,the Olympic Games will come soon.I’m very proud of being a student of Beijing,and I think that I should do something for the 2008 Olympics.Let’s share my product first.Do you know what it is?Of course,they’re five rings.Its name’s five ring classification dustbin.It’s convenient to separate all kinds of domestic garbage.This product is made of wrappers of chips.I collected the wrappers after ate chips and used them to make dustbin.
It’s not difficult to make.First of all,I washed the wrappers of chips and stuck them into the shape.Secondly,I labled this dustbin carefully.Finally,the classifiction dustbin is finished.
We usually classify waste into batteries,paper,metal,plastic and peels.The classification of garbage becomes simple by using this dustbin.
It’s very simple,but it has many benefits.On one hand,the empty wrappers can be recycled.On the other hand,garbage classification will bring more greenness to the Beijing Olympics.“Green Olympic” is the motto of 2008 Olympic Games.We have great responsibility to make Beijing more clean,more beautiful.I hope my small product will do some things for the Olympics.
I firmly believe that everyone can do some things for the Olympics.Besides,I hope that the 29th Olympic Games will be one of the most successful Olympics in the history of the Games!That’s all,thank you very much!
请修改一下文章,请改正语法错误,并且请把你认为好的语句替换.急…如果好的话会有加分的!
Speech
Hello teachers!Today,I’d like to share with you my product designed by myself.As we know,the Olympic Games will come soon.I’m very proud of being a student of Beijing,and I think that I should do something for the 2008 Olympics.Let’s share my product first.Do you know what it is?Of course,they’re five rings.Its name’s five ring classification dustbin.It’s convenient to separate all kinds of domestic garbage.This product is made of wrappers of chips.I collected the wrappers after ate chips and used them to make dustbin.
It’s not difficult to make.First of all,I washed the wrappers of chips and stuck them into the shape.Secondly,I labled this dustbin carefully.Finally,the classifiction dustbin is finished.
We usually classify waste into batteries,paper,metal,plastic and peels.The classification of garbage becomes simple by using this dustbin.
It’s very simple,but it has many benefits.On one hand,the empty wrappers can be recycled.On the other hand,garbage classification will bring more greenness to the Beijing Olympics.“Green Olympic” is the motto of 2008 Olympic Games.We have great responsibility to make Beijing more clean,more beautiful.I hope my small product will do some things for the Olympics.
I firmly believe that everyone can do some things for the Olympics.Besides,I hope that the 29th Olympic Games will be one of the most successful Olympics in the history of the Games!That’s all,thank you very much!
Speech
Hello teachers (Hello everyone更地道)!Today, I’d like to share with you my product designed by myself（I'd like to present my product designed by myself to you）. As we(you) know, the Olympic Games will come soon. I’m very proud of being a student of Beijing, and I think that I should do something for the 2008 Olympics. Let’s(let me) share my product first. Do you know what it is(Guess what is it?)? Of course, they’re five rings. Its name's (name is)five ring classification dustbin. It’s convenient to separate all kinds of domestic garbage(garbages). This product is made of wrappers of chips. I collected the wrappers after ate chips and used them to make dustbin.
It’s not difficult to make. First of all, I washed the wrappers of chips and stuck them into the shape. Secondly, I labled this dustbin carefully. Finally, the classifiction dustbin is finished.
We usually classify waste into batteries, paper, metal, plastic and peels. The classification of garbage becomes simple by using this dustbin.
It’s very simple, but it has many benefits. On one hand, the empty wrappers can be recycled. On the other hand, garbage classification will bring more greenness to the Beijing Olympics. “Green Olympic” is the motto of 2008 Olympic Games. We have great responsibility to make Beijing more clean (cleaner不是nore clean), more beautiful. I hope my small product will do some things for the Olympics.
I firmly believe that everyone can do some things (something) for the Olympics. Besides, I hope that the 29th Olympic Games will be one of the most successful Olympics in the history of the Games! That’s all, thank you very much!
Hello teachers (Hello everyone更地道)!Today, I’d like to share with you my product designed by myself（I'd like to present my product designed by myself to you）. As we(you) know, the Olympic Games will come soon. I’m very proud of being a student of Beijing, and I think that I should do something for the 2008 Olympics. Let’s(let me) share my product first. Do you know what it is(Guess what is it?)? Of course, they’re five rings. Its name's (name is)five ring classification dustbin. It’s convenient to separate all kinds of domestic garbage(garbages). This product is made of wrappers of chips. I collected the wrappers after ate chips and used them to make dustbin.
It’s not difficult to make. First of all, I washed the wrappers of chips and stuck them into the shape. Secondly, I labled this dustbin carefully. Finally, the classifiction dustbin is finished.
We usually classify waste into batteries, paper, metal, plastic and peels. The classification of garbage becomes simple by using this dustbin.
It’s very simple, but it has many benefits. On one hand, the empty wrappers can be recycled. On the other hand, garbage classification will bring more greenness to the Beijing Olympics. “Green Olympic” is the motto of 2008 Olympic Games. We have great responsibility to make Beijing more clean (cleaner不是nore clean), more beautiful. I hope my small product will do some things for the Olympics.
I firmly believe that everyone can do some things (something) for the Olympics. Besides, I hope that the 29th Olympic Games will be one of the most successful Olympics in the history of the Games! That’s all, thank you very much!