那位英语大仙帮我修改一下口语报告的小作文!

那位英语大仙帮我修改一下口语报告的小作文!
就是个口语小报告 我想介绍一下豆瓣这个网站 但是吧 自己改着改着实在是词穷啊、 希望大家能给我的小报告升个级呗~跪谢、、、改完了能发俺邮箱不?linchen0127@sina.com谢谢谢、、
Today I would like to introduce one of my favorite sites to you,and its name is Douban.The site address is www.douban.com.I am on this site almost every day.I remembered that one of my best friends recommended it to me three years ago.This site is simple but very content and it is of great benefit to me.On this site,you can see a lot of introductions and recommendations about many books,movies and music.Everyone can express their views about a book.You can also see the price comparison about the same book on various sites.You can also communicate with the author's about your own thoughts and views.You can also see evaluation and summary about the classic movies on it.There is the authority of the films ranked.Another feature of this site is its music recommendation.I know a lot of good songs through this site.There are a lot of people who love music and make their own songs.These songs are very popular among us.On this site,you can find other people who have the same interests with you,and you can also add a variety of strange and interesting groups.This is the most important reason why I like this site.I met a lot of new friends through this site.This site has a variety of groups.Some groups are about the snacks,some teams are about pop music,and some groups are on the travel and photography and so on.Because the same hobbies,the web site to all of us gathered together.Communication with us,discover and discuss.I like this feeling.

Today I would like to introduce one of my favorite sites to you.Its name is Douban. The site address is www.douban.com. I am on this site almost every day. I remembered that one of my best friends recommended it to me three years ago. This site is simple but very content and it is of great benefit to me. On this site, you can see a lot of introductions and recommendations about many books, movies and music. Everyone can express their views about books. You can not only see the price comparison about the same book on various sites,but also communicate with the author's about your own thoughts and views. Besides that, You can also see evaluation and summary about the classic movies . There is the authority of the films ranked. Another feature of this site is its music recommendation. I know a lot of good songs through this site. There are a lot of people who love music and make their own songs. These songs are very popular among us. On this site, you can find other people who have the same interests with you, and you can also add a variety of strange and interesting groups. This is the most important reason that I like it. I knew a lot of new friends through this site. This site has a variety of groups. Some groups are about the snacks, others are about pop music.Some groups are on the travel and photography and so on. Because of the same hobbies, the web site gathered all of us together,communicated with us, discovered and discussed with us. I like this kind of feeling.
再问： 请问结尾那几句能改不 还有那个 group那几句 、、、原谅我吧 毕竟老师要求高、、