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帮忙修改一下我的英语作文
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life in the countryside
countryside is very beautiful ,there is it.
in the country ,every one has a big house and a big garden ,it is very beautiful ,we can piant flowers in the garden
in the country ,there are many mountains ,peopie can clamp the mountain,ther is many trees and flouwers is the mountain,so it is very beautiful .
in the country ,we can see many thins,do you like it?
countryside is very beautiful,with which not only can we relaxed our heart and body,but we also feast our eyes.
In the country ,everyone has a big and beautiful house and a big and pretty garden in which we can plant a number of flowers.
In addition,there are many a mountain for us to climb on.As is known to all,there are a world of greens in mountains which can give us insight into what's the countryside life essentially!most importantly,we have access to much more things than the urban areas!so,do you like it?
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