作业帮一个短文改错---务必高手进---在线等
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一个短文改错---务必高手进---在线等
Parents can be examples for their children.Here is a story.
One day a little boy watched his presents
planting flowers in the garden,and he then learned
to water and look after the little plants.When he
saw that the flowers were growing well,he
shared the happiness with his
parents.Their hard work resulted in beautiful
flowers in full bloom,and the boy’s father proudly
picked a flower and gave it to his wife to
show his love.But,to there（her）surprise,the （请改正此句）
boy picked all the flowers and presented them to his parents.
Only at this moment did the parents realize
the great effects which their behavior had on their child.
So I think that parents should try to be good teachers.
答案是将their改为her.我已经改正了.但我觉得还有一处错误,就是要将but 改为 however.我记得however要用逗号隔开,but不用逗号隔开.
Parents can be examples for their children.Here is a story.
One day a little boy watched his presents
planting flowers in the garden,and he then learned
to water and look after the little plants.When he
saw that the flowers were growing well,he
shared the happiness with his
parents.Their hard work resulted in beautiful
flowers in full bloom,and the boy’s father proudly
picked a flower and gave it to his wife to
show his love.But,to there（her）surprise,the （请改正此句）
boy picked all the flowers and presented them to his parents.
Only at this moment did the parents realize
the great effects which their behavior had on their child.
So I think that parents should try to be good teachers.
答案是将their改为her.我已经改正了.但我觉得还有一处错误,就是要将but 改为 however.我记得however要用逗号隔开,but不用逗号隔开.
当用正式的写作:不能使用but开始句子.
So 你是对的,用 However,.
但我认为这可以使用their,因为孩子的父母双方都感到surprised.
So 你是对的,用 However,.
但我认为这可以使用their,因为孩子的父母双方都感到surprised.