作业帮英语短文改错(在线等)
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英语短文改错(在线等)
" I think summer is a wonderful season so I love it more than the others.In the summer,
I can swimming all the time,I feel it very good.In the summer,there are many cheap and
sweet watermelons.they are so succose and tasty that I always like to eat them when I
watching TV.In the summer,girls wear so hot and there are many hot girls with bikini on the
beach.Wow,nice view!What the wonderful summer!"
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" I think summer is a wonderful season so I love it more than the others.In the summer,
I can swimming all the time,I feel it very good.In the summer,there are many cheap and
sweet watermelons.they are so succose and tasty that I always like to eat them when I
watching TV.In the summer,girls wear so hot and there are many hot girls with bikini on the
beach.Wow,nice view!What the wonderful summer!"
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“I think”去掉i think summer is a wonderful season “so”换成and I love it “more than the others”换成best.In “the”去掉 summer,
I “can”换成go swimming all the time,I feel “it”去掉 very good.In “the去掉” summer,there are many cheap and
sweet watermelons.they are so succose换成juicy and tasty that I always like to eat them when I
watching去ing TV.In the去掉 summer,girls wear so hot and there are many hot girls with bikini on the
beach.Wow,nice view!What the换成a wonderful summer 加上time!"
一般般.句式单调.没有条理.不流畅.从游泳跳到吃西瓜看电视又回到沙滩.乱.
summer is such a wonderful time!i always go swimming with my good friends in summer afternoons.it's cool in swimming pool and i feel comfortable when i am floating on the water,facing the sky.sometimes i dream i was swimming in the sea,there were pretty bikini girls everywhere on the beach wow!life is beautiful!
in the evening,i watch tv with my family .we share a big watermelon together.it is my favourite,juicy ,sweet and not expensive at all.so i eat a lot until i can't eat them any more.
I “can”换成go swimming all the time,I feel “it”去掉 very good.In “the去掉” summer,there are many cheap and
sweet watermelons.they are so succose换成juicy and tasty that I always like to eat them when I
watching去ing TV.In the去掉 summer,girls wear so hot and there are many hot girls with bikini on the
beach.Wow,nice view!What the换成a wonderful summer 加上time!"
一般般.句式单调.没有条理.不流畅.从游泳跳到吃西瓜看电视又回到沙滩.乱.
summer is such a wonderful time!i always go swimming with my good friends in summer afternoons.it's cool in swimming pool and i feel comfortable when i am floating on the water,facing the sky.sometimes i dream i was swimming in the sea,there were pretty bikini girls everywhere on the beach wow!life is beautiful!
in the evening,i watch tv with my family .we share a big watermelon together.it is my favourite,juicy ,sweet and not expensive at all.so i eat a lot until i can't eat them any more.