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帮忙看看GRE作文的语法错误
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大家不好意思,作文发不上,只能用小号发(好象发不上) ,请== 这只能有第一段(其他的在问题"帮忙看看GRE作文的语法错误2""帮忙看看GRE作文的语法错误3"(都有悬赏分)
The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.”
人总是比机器聪明,因为机器只不过是人类的工具而已
It has been frequently remarked that the society has been profoundly predominated by human and machine.The speaker claims that the human’s intelligence is better than machine’s because the human could product them in manufactories what they want.In my view the speaker unfairly generalizes.In some areas,such as administration,we have to use our mind brilliantly to decide what and how to do and not use machine.However,in other areas,especially the calculation,machines can be more efficient and accurate than human.In still other areas,particularly the statistics,the superior position varies from casa to case.
It has been frequently remarked that the society has been dominated by human and machines.The speaker claims that the human’s intelligence is better than machine’s because the human could product them in manufactories what they want.In my view the speaker unfairly generalizes++++++++++(最好写上点东西).In some areas,such as administration,(we have to use our mind wisely to decide what and how to do and not use machine 此句不通顺 别扭).However,in some other areas,especially for calculation,machines can work more efficiently and accurately than human.(In still other areas,particularly the statistics,the superior position varies from casa to case 这个例子不好 换个 比如图像分析 动画设计)