作业帮帮忙改一篇英语作文,看看有没有语法错误
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帮忙改一篇英语作文,看看有没有语法错误
Many people want to be volunteer.I also dream about it.But what should we do to be a volunteer?Here are some suggestions.
First,we must have a good body.It’s the most impotant thing.Next,we should be willing to be a volunteer.Then,we must be patient to others.After all,volunteer is a job to help other people.Finally,well,we’d better manage our time well.
Being a volunteer isn’t as easy as you can imagine.If you do ,do it carefully.I believe we can do it!Let’s take action!
提提修改意见!
Many people want to be volunteer.I also dream about it.But what should we do to be a volunteer?Here are some suggestions.
First,we must have a good body.It’s the most impotant thing.Next,we should be willing to be a volunteer.Then,we must be patient to others.After all,volunteer is a job to help other people.Finally,well,we’d better manage our time well.
Being a volunteer isn’t as easy as you can imagine.If you do ,do it carefully.I believe we can do it!Let’s take action!
提提修改意见!
基本上语法是没得问题的、句子也通顺
其实in my opinion：可以把next 与then调换一下位置
因为一般then会在next前面...
其实in my opinion：可以把next 与then调换一下位置
因为一般then会在next前面...