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文章题目是“I have an appointment with English Supper League"
This is my first time particpates in English Super League.Before then,I didn't know something about this.Then I surved the net and looked up the English Super League.I saw many photos.In photos,many children were preparing the competition very nervous.Everyone was lovely,and I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate the English Super League now.I think I will be happy like them.I will have an appointment with English Super League.
文章题目是“I have an appointment with English Supper League"
This is my first time particpates in English Super League.Before then,I didn't know something about this.Then I surved the net and looked up the English Super League.I saw many photos.In photos,many children were preparing the competition very nervous.Everyone was lovely,and I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate the English Super League now.I think I will be happy like them.I will have an appointment with English Super League.
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改正如下:
This is my first time (to particpate) in English Super League. Before then, I didn't know (anything) about this. Then I (searched on) the net and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos. In(these) photos, many children were preparing (for)the competition (nervously). Everyone was lovely, (but) I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate (in)the English Super League now. I think I will be (also) happy (as) them. I will have an appointment with English Super League.
改正如下:
This is my first time (to particpate) in English Super League. Before then, I didn't know (anything) about this. Then I (searched on) the net and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos. In(these) photos, many children were preparing (for)the competition (nervously). Everyone was lovely, (but) I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate (in)the English Super League now. I think I will be (also) happy (as) them. I will have an appointment with English Super League.