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我写了一篇过去式的文章,跪求高手帮我看看哪里写错了.感激万分
last weekend,I had a bad weekend.On Saturday morning,I got up at 8’o clock.My mother cooked a delicious breakfast for me,I felt so happy.After breakfast,I went for a walk with my cat.When we in the park,I thought very dry,so I went to buy some water.I tied my cat by the tree.When I came back,my cat was disappear.I looked for my cat about two hours.At last,I saw my cat play games with other cats.I thought they’re playing very crazy because I saw my cat is very dirty.I was very angry.Because I have to take a bath for my cat.
【七年级水平勿介意】
第二行we后面少了are 第三行不应该说thought very dry,要么说felt very thirsty 第四行for my cat后应该加for 还有就是说猫玩游戏好像不太妥当,可以把第四行的game去掉 倒数第二行的crazy感觉不大对,但我也说不出到底该怎么改,其实我比你还小你信么?